*squeals in delight* Another perfect ending to a perfect fic! Having Roger use "Welcome to the American Night" as his poem was an amazing idea. In fact, this fic is probably your best yet! Hey, I don't know if you have heard of but it's a forum welcomes any and all Rentheads and some of the folks there love good fanfiction, so they might appreciate meeting you (virtually) and reading some of your work.

All the best as usual,
Marcie Cohen

p.s. If you do join VFR, PLEASE do me a huge favour and say MarcieCohen sent you.

This fic is amazing. I'm so sorry that it's been so long...I don't have a real excuse, and I'm not gonna lie to you. Everyone was incredibly in character, and it's obvious that you put a LOT of effort into this fic. It was worth it. I LOVE IT and like I said, it's particularly impressive that you kept everyone so amazingly in character...it's just wonderful. Thanks! :D

Awesome! Very good way of ending, putting the poem at the end. I feel like I have to go listen to The Doors now.

Yay! Updates at last! I've been wanting to read Mark's chapter for quite a while! Also, thanks SO much for the compliments. I will be home on break from college in just over a month, so I'll start an account and post my first fic then. It's an incredibly stupid Rent humour fic where the characters find themselves in the Mall of America.

All the best as usual,

Marcie Cohen

I liked this chapter, especially the ending. This was a good poem choice! I can't wait for the next chpater!!

i really like that poem. lol you did a great jb with Mimi.

Ah! I've been looking forward to Maureen's since I started reading this. And, finally, I am rewarded. Yay! It was great, honey. You captured Maureen right on. Update again soon!

You really captured Maureen's bubbly personality. Hehe. I can't wait for the next one. I think it's Mimi?

Aww! I love Mark! Please update soon, I wanna see everyone else's poems!

"Confusedly in a swish of shoulder-length hair."
Haha. Very sweet chapter Petite. I love my puppy dearly. Post more!

Nice chapter! I didn't really get the poem, but the way Mark compared it to things made it makes sense. Good job!

This story is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.

Your amazing writing clicks with the ideas and the poem choices really well, and your OCs are amazing too. i haven't even read the stories they live in, but I still understand and love their chapters. I didn't review for the last chapter because I had to leave and forgot, but it was AWESOME. you totally rock! Oh, and as to "where are my readers?" I don't know about anybody else, but I'm 100% here, this story's too good to leave.

How's THAT for a review?

This is amazing. I almost cried, actually, and not many stories have been able to do that. No fanfiction has, to tell you the truth. Your use of metaphor and simile are amazing and being a poetry lover myself, I love all the references. Keep writing!

Double digits! More power to you mon ami! Post Lily's soon, Juliet's is absolutely beautiful. Look for someone to make this chapter into a short film, I'm not kidding.

Wow...I'm actually speechless (and that is rare for me). This is AMAZING!! And your bio is so interesting! You sound like an amazing person who has seen a lot of hardship, but has come through it. Maybe that is why you're such a good writer? Many famous poets in particular have been influenced and inspired by tragedy. Keep up the amazing work.

No day but today,

Marcie Cohen