Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE!

When will Ryoma wake up? XD Oh and pls update soon!

me liky!! I want to be beta! please update soon please. great story! :)

Please don't discontinue this story!
It's really good!
I'm willing to beta it for you, if you don't already have a beta-reader. =D

love it really interesting

It's a good story! I really like the idea, it's unique.

P.S. If you're still looking for someone to beta, I could probably do it, if you wanted.

I'll beta for you. ^_^ great chapter, but it seemed sorta short. if you want to email me the redone chapters, i'll beta those too. ^_^

You updated, yay! I had forgotten about this story, but as soon as I saw the title, I remembered it! It was son interesting that I had to click on it again! (Then I wondered why it wasn't on my alert list and came to the conclusion that the last time you updated, I didn't know that list existed...)

I would love to help, but I'm afraid I can't. I have 6 courses this coming term...and I thought I had learned my lesson already... sorry!

Though I don't think your flow is too bad. I've seen MUCH worse, believe me. Then again, this was a relatively short chapter, and would therefore be easier to write. If you like, I can always tell you my opinion in the review? I'd probably do that regadles..

cool!love it!

Oh and before I forget, I'm experienced, seeing as I Beta-read for five other people. UUWWAAHH!

Well hello there, I wouldn't mind beta-ing your story for you. While I do put focus on grammer and spelling I also do well with helping my beta-y keep track and on-line with the story and plot. And make sure the flow of the story is good as well.

Lol, Rock Paper Scissors...

Very good story thus far. I really liked it.

love it!

This is an interesting side story with Rock, Paper, Scissors xD Or as Atobe would call it "The Peasant's Game" xD Now where did I hear that from before? :\ I can't wait for the next chapter! (Or a new side story xD).

-ChibisukeGirl