this is sad but interesting. YOu have a good writing style. please update.

Hm this story has been on here awhile, and this is te first time that I read it. Well some of it. Anyway, I've truely enjoyed reading these first two chapters. Off to a great start. I would finish the rest, but I have to get ready 4 work. But fear not I will definitely return later to finish reading this awesome story. So just keep those updates coming, and I'll keep playing catch up. Amazing job. Laters.

Very good story. I really feel sorry for Pan. But plese updat soon,I want to know what's going to happen next.

Keep up the good work. =]

I felt as need to review as you had been so kind as to do the same for me. I'm loving the concept of the story, it's very original and you're making it work well.

However I do have to point out a small kink in the work, you have to begin a new paragraph every time a new character speaks.

Once again, great work.

Hm...I wonder what's going to happen next? Is pan going to fall in love with Mirai (future) Trunks, and is Mirai Trunks going to fall in love with pan? Will she even want to go back to her old timeline, maybe she'll want to stay in Mirai Trunks's timeline? And if so how will the present Trunks feel if that happens since he's in love with pan as well. Its going to be a love triangle, I just know it. And I hope that either Vegeta or Trunks beat the crap out of Gohan, he deserves it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Lots of Love,
Panny

Good story. Update soon.

you KILLED her?!?! WTH!

how can you kill the protagonist. D:

make her come to life!!

BTW, loved goten's outburst :P

i really like the story plz update soon

"Criticism is welcome, flamers will be laughed at."

Like your stile!

Anyway, what'sup with the saiyan moon. Where they about to mate or did the moon make them fight until he hurt her?

I absolutely love this story! I keep trying to figure out whats going to happen next. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see whats going to happen now that Pan is heading back in time.(fidgetting in seat from just thinking about next chapter) Well continue to write this awesome story, and I can't wait until the next chapter.

Lots of Love,
Panny

Good, I like it and even if you dont like it you can make it so you do. So don't say you dont like it cuz thats your fault. Still I find it good, have your own opinion but its good!! Hope you update soon.

NICE CHAPTER. PLEASE UPDATE WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE CAUSE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!

Yep! it is good. Some of the moments in these chapters makes me want to cry.

*smiles* I really do enjoy reading these chapters and can't wait to read the next one. But could you possibly make it longer next time.

*smiles again* thanks. Keep up the good work!

I LIKE THIS CHA[TER. TRUNKS IS BEONG SO SWEET. PLEASE UPDATE WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE CAUSE I WAMNT TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. AND POOR CHICHI I WANT TO CRY FOR HER TOO!

Nice story... I think it's good. Continue it, please, I liked reading it so far.