I thought it was very emotional and well-planned until Draco's cock appeared... that was kind-of random :\. Still interesting to read though! (and yes I understand the emotional point of the penis.)

Very good! I loved it! Too bad it's only a one-shot because I would've loved to see what happens next :)

Different, but understandable.

pretty and perfect!

It was good, though I felt something was missing. I don't know what it is... :S Don't know what to say, to be honest, just don't think it's very nice not to leave a review...

woah, very violent. Interesting idea though, you did a good job with it.

o0o0o0o00o0o0o0! it makes me wish it wasnt a one-shot! fabulous job!

wow, I've got no words for this, but though I'll try. I was amazing, you're so good at writting, and this piece is wonderful. It has so many feeling in it and yet it's not explecit. It's so mysterieus, so there is still some room to fill something in yourself. It's so wow, cuz it's more feeling than story, such intense feelings,... intense ... that's the word. I could so feel it all, and that's how I like it. I would ask for a sequel, but that would spoil the whole thing, I guess, so leave it there. You're fantastic, never ever stop writting.

You. you have brought me back to my place of abode. i have failed t attend but have longed for it all this while. You. you gave it to me! tsk, AGAIN, ohgodsohott! 'He sobbed.' that was my favourite! i felt uncomfortable; only, So comfortable. draco, harry, and you. and that is all. oh, the suffering! it was so intense. for me. for harry. there was blood there too. you're my favourite, again!

ho ho job. can u write about someone OTHER than draco and harry? very bloody and angsty, tho.