'I like your socks.' That line just made me smile! So cute!

Max has on a James Bond t-shirt! ^^ I think all the students at this school went to my high school. I liked how you introduced 99 and the refer to Max accidentally blowing up a building in Hong Kong!
~Agent Malkere

Okay, Mila is a scary, scary kid! O.O
E! 99 is on her way! ^^ Can't wait!
Once again, awesome writing!
~Agent Malkere

Gotta love Max! ^^ He would wear a trench coat to be a teacher's assistant. I love your writing style! Fantabulous first chapter! Onto number two!
~Agent Malkere

good story...r holly and 99 related? please update SOON

I am not familiar with your other stories but seeing Max from a stranger's viewpoint is an intriguing idea. It will be interesting to see how it progresses.