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abraxis
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseMurdock and Luna ... that's just ... actually it's really quite perfect. LOL

I love your "new and improved" Severus. I like the idea of his escaping from the British Wizarding world and experiencing the more liberated, laid back American version - as well as gaining some better experiences with the muggle side of his heritage. I also think that Hannibal as well as Face will embrace his Slytherin talents a hell of a lot more honestly than Dumbledore ever did.

I just wish you had introduced BA to Hagrid. I can see a satisfying friendship developing there. Both are similarily quite elemental in their approach to life.

Thank you for a good, fun story.
loving-reader-and-writer
2008-08-07
ch 10,
abusenice. very well done. i like the fact that it wasnt a typical time turner fic. it was defanantly original. i didnt see anything that reminded me of another fic. And i have read more than i could count. I LOVED IT. do keep writing.
excessivelyperky
2008-08-04
ch 10,
abuse(loud applause) Great ending, and I'm glad Snape is sensible enough to find his own way home, thank you very much.

As for attachment disorder, I've heard lots of stories about those Romanian orphanages under Nicolai Ceacescu and his regime. Oliver was better off with Fagin! (now, there's a plot bunny, suppose Tom Riddle was taken up by a latter day version instead of stuck in an orphanage...).

Ahem. I wish Murdock and the Lovegoods all the luck in the world in finding the Snorkacks. And I know, just _know_ that Face and Snape are now pretending to be Nigerians .
selenepotter
2008-08-02
ch 10,
abusewhat? no homemade tank? you can't have an A-Team episode without making a tank!

I loved this fic and wouldn't mind more.

More?

MORE!
lantana
2008-07-31
ch 10,
abuseThis must be THE funniest story ever! "Avada kwuk" indeed!
Zarz
2008-07-31
ch 10,
abuseGreat story! I may have already mentioned this, but this was the story that first got me incredibly interested in the A-Team. Thank you so much! This was a wonderful story, and I loved the interactions between the A-Team and the professors at Hogwarts. The ending was great, and I can just see Murdock and Luna getting along astoundingly. Keep up the great work!
xXxFailingDreamsxXx
2008-07-29
ch 10,
abuseWonderful!
SomeGuyFawkes
2008-07-28
ch 10,
abuseThanks for the update.
Weirkat
2008-07-28
ch 10,
abuseI'm sorry to see it go, but I enjoyed reading this cross over.

Thanks for having shared.
Voldemort is Dead
2008-07-28
ch 10,
abuseGotta love this! In a previous chapter, Luna recognizing the Giant Space Hamster is hilarious! Hopefully you know I know where that came from. Minsc from the Baldurs Gate series. He had the hamster named Boo. Gotta give it to Luna!

Well Done!
Voldemort is Dead
2008-07-28
ch 2,
abuseLOL! GO FOR THE EYES, MOO! I hear that phrase often in the Buldur's Gate Games from a character named Minsc who has a "Giant Space Hamster named Boo! He always says that! He says "Go for the eyes, Boo!" though.

I like the idea of crossing Harry Potter with The A Team. Always liked that show.
Cateagle
2008-07-28
ch 10,
abusePoor Tom, sometimes it just doesn't pay to be a Dark Lord. Maybe he'll take up some more peaceful hobby in the next life, assuming the demons allow that. Good wrap up and i've enjoyed the entire story.
Ciroth
2008-07-28
ch 10,
abuseThanks for the story. Not many cross over with this group!
Ranger Dragen
2008-07-28
ch 10,
abuseGreat end to the story mate, can't wait to read any of stories you might write. Oh I like that Face and Snape got along with each other.

Oh I love how many Harry Potters were appearing in front of Voldy. I like that Snape is joining the A-Team.

The only thing I can say that could make the story better, was if you put more detile into it.
Gundum M
2008-07-28
ch 10,
abuseseems a bit anit-climatic. still good and well writeen. could use a sequal
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