Yet another perfect post-ep by you! And kudos to you for writing the first fic involving Bones and Parker that didn't feel OOC for me. I love this one! In spite of Booth's little speech- and the fact that he says it to her implies that he wants to cross the line; if he didn't, there'd be no need for a line!- this ep really needed a B/B post-ep and this was just perfect. Thank you.

YOU'RE MY FAVIORATE WRITER ON THIS WHOLE THING I JUST THOUGHT YOU SHOULD KNOW THAT.

You have done a really great job with this story. This ep was very dark, specially for Booth, and I think you have written a perfect end to it, full of tenderness. I really loved it :-)

Loved the way you describe how they both know what they have but how they realize that they cant just let it be. Like Brennan thought, its "bittersweet".

Congrats on a great fic!

Thank you very much for sharing! :-)

aw i like it! Very sweet.

Just wanted to say I enjoy you're fic- it's nice to find writers who not only have a keen appreciation for grammar and spelling, but also have a great sense of characterization. Plus, your stories are just fun to read! Thanks! Keep it up!

Well written story. I think you captured their thoughts and emotions wonderfully.

Great piece!

it good you should make a story about"one day" good work anyway

Very cute! Thanks for writing this.

This was wonderful.

You touched on all the major thematic elements of that episode and tied it up nicely. I for one felt the ep came to a rather rushed ending. I am pleased with your elongated version.

The hero complex, the desire versus reality, the juxtaposition of childhood innocence with the ugliness of the crimes they investigate... It was all very much in the vein of the show.

Thank you. :)

good one!

That was incredibly lovely! It's just what I imagined happening after their conversation at the end of the ep. Keep up the fabulous work, sweetie!

-SerenityMeiMei

aw

i can totally picture this! they will make a beautiful family one day!

Aw . . . so cute.

Good...you stuck within the realm of reality which was really comforting, as so many usually jump right out of it, and causes me to dislike the characters I usually like so much. Very good.