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DANIHIGHLEY
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseYOU'RE MY FAVIORATE WRITER ON THIS WHOLE THING I JUST THOUGHT YOU SHOULD KNOW THAT.
Habita
2007-08-01
ch 1,
abuseYou have done a really great job with this story. This ep was very dark, specially for Booth, and I think you have written a perfect end to it, full of tenderness. I really loved it :-)

Loved the way you describe how they both know what they have but how they realize that they can´t just let it be. Like Brennan thought, it´s "bittersweet".

Congrats on a great fic!

Thank you very much for sharing! :-)
zosohoorah
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuseaw i like it! Very sweet.
new
2007-04-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseJust wanted to say I enjoy you're fic- it's nice to find writers who not only have a keen appreciation for grammar and spelling, but also have a great sense of characterization. Plus, your stories are just fun to read! Thanks! Keep it up!
kah154
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abuseWell written story. I think you captured their thoughts and emotions wonderfully.
AJeff
2007-02-04
ch 1,
abuseGreat piece!
wayway
2007-02-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseit good you should make a story about"one day" good work anyway
DaLiza
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseVery cute! Thanks for writing this.
Howdylynn
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseThis was wonderful.

You touched on all the major thematic elements of that episode and tied it up nicely. I for one felt the ep came to a rather rushed ending. I am pleased with your elongated version.

The hero complex, the desire versus reality, the juxtaposition of childhood innocence with the ugliness of the crimes they investigate... It was all very much in the vein of the show.

Thank you. :)
squint-squad
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abusegood one!
Faith5x5
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseThat was incredibly lovely! It's just what I imagined happening after their conversation at the end of the ep. Keep up the fabulous work, sweetie!

--SerenityMeiMei
ameriker
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseaw

i can totally picture this! they will make a beautiful family one day!
Cora Clavia
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseAw . . . so cute.
Sherrylou
2007-02-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood...you stuck within the realm of reality which was really comforting, as so many usually jump right out of it, and causes me to dislike the characters I usually like so much. Very good.
saturn567
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseawesome one-shot!
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