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funky-monkey-93
2007-10-16
ch 13,
abuseupdate soon!
Supernatural Nightmare
2007-07-02
ch 13,
abuseThis was great!! I really liked it.
THwriter
2007-06-19
ch 13,
abusegeez! i love your story. it's totally awesome! and you should right what happens next! i dunno maybe just a one shot sequel or something but its really good and there's place for an ending. im speechless, its really awesome. nice job.
nemo123489
2007-02-06
ch 13,
abuseyou have to write a sequel you can't leave us haning like this.

I mean where's Dan?

Is Lucas okay? Because it seems like PEyton adn Nathan need to get him to the hospital b/c it seems liek he's about to pass out.

You really need to write a sequel or at least an epiloge.

come on please
maddiex0xanne
2007-02-06
ch 13,
abusethis story was amazing! i cant believe it was your first one. please keep writing!
Leyton-equals-TrueLoveAlway...
2007-02-06
ch 13,
abusei cant believe that was your first fan fict. it was cool. I loved the ending. fab
nemo123489
2007-02-06
ch 11,
abusegoodjob update again soon please let Peytona dn Nathan find Lucas and please don't kill him
nemo123489
2007-02-04
ch 10,
abusegoodjob update again soon please
shenova
2007-02-04
ch 9,
abuseI am really liking your story and the fact that you are dealing with the aftermath of the car accident and how everyone deals with it especially Lucas. I am really interested to see how Luke deals with the idea that dan may have killed his own brother I mean what can anyone do with that information? Looking forward to the next chapter.
nemo123489
2007-02-04
ch 8,
abusegoodjob udpate again soon please. What does Lucas mena by he can't stand it anymore
nemo123489
2007-02-04
ch 7,
abusegoodjob update again soon please get Lucas tos tart taking it easy b/c if not he's gonna give himself another heart attack
The Ghost of Christmas Goth
2007-02-03
ch 4,
abuseaww! go LP! =]
nemo123489
2007-02-03
ch 4,
abuseawesome job update again soon please
The Ghost of Christmas Goth
2007-02-03
ch 2,
abusepretty good so far. ud soon. put some leyton in it! obviously there is already naley in it.
nemo123489
2007-02-03
ch 2,
abusegoodjob update again soon please
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