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| Elliesmeow 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. It fit really well. Thanks for the post. I was so mad at Catherine in that episode! your fic put a new spin on things that I hadn't thought of yet. But I'm still really mad!;) -Ellie |
| xoSnickersxo 2007-05-26 ch 1, | abuseGrissom is a loser and Nick is the man! Snickers needs to happen and GSR needs to be burried a million feet under. nice story. i loved it. |
| Fyrekiss 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseSweet. That cocoon bit was kinda nice on Grissom's part but for heavens sake it' not Sara's thing it's yours. |
| thjersyjnkx33 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseaw =[ poor grissom and sara. yay for nick! |
| SistaSouljah 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abuseSee, it's ficlets like these that're further signs that the Great American Novel needs to start being written. Everyone kept their clothes on yet I still loved it. That's powerful for you. But don't let this glowing review deter you from other kinds of powerful ficlets. :) And thanks for the cocoon reference. For some reason that always makes me laugh just thinking about it. |
| januarynineteen 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet and plausible. If only the producers would hire you as a writer... Figuring out what the title meant actually took me a while, but I like it. Suits the situation perfectly. Hope to read more from you soon. :) |
| Space-Case7029 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Feel sorry for Sara. Grissom seems too protective of himself, or too scared of Sara to send her a letter. There's always the telephone, he just doesn't seem to have the courage to communicate with her. Loved how Nick took the news from Sara. He's just the sweetest man. Loved it. Audra |
| bubblecat 2007-02-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseListening to Tim McGraw's just be your tear when reading. Great story, this is that kinda things we never get to see on the show, and from the way it goes now, I for one really not looking forward to see the follow up. n_s |
| SassySasha19 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseJust the right amount of angst and semi-fluffyness between Nick and Sara. And I have to say I never thought of how badly and why Catherine's betrayal would have hurt Nick. That was a very nice insight. Great job. |
| Nicki-hunny 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseoh come on that can't be it please u have to do more please please please |
| CSI-4077 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat story!! You always kind of feel sorry for Grissom, but at the same time it's hard. Thanks again for an amazing story. |
| El Gringo Loco 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseOk, Sara feels comfortable talking to Nick. But I think he sees himself more as a protective brother. (Growing up around 7 or 8 sisters, he'd have had a lot of experience.) As such he places her off limits. A respected friend and colleague as opposed to fair game for the fraternity playboy he's often portrayed as. As for Grissom, he's a self centered idiot, Period. |
| DarkDreamer56 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, I love the title. Very appropriate for the situation I think. And I like that Nick is able to push aside the hurt at being kept in the dark because of his concern for Sara. There is just such a connection between Sara and Nick, and even if people don't see it translating into a romantic interest (which obviously we do :) ), I don't understand why the writers don't utilize it as much as they could. Another amazing fic! |
| CSIFan4Life 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic! I wish they would show more of the personal relationships on the show instead of the two seconds they show here and there. Even if it just dealt with their friendships, like this fic did. |
| katydid13 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseVery good piece! |