I vote you DO write the Twister thing XD

I loved this. Crazy for you was so great (and I just had to read this, despite it being a lemon...Im a bad person) XD

KEEP IT UP BUDDY!

really quick =/ haha but hot =)

not bad for your first lemon xD

i feel like such a perv now

Those two playing twister!? That's just.. Awesome.. xD *laughs*

*Ahem* Right.. Um... What was I supposed to be doing?

OH! Review! Okay! ^^U


God was that hot! o_o The ending was so cute though, and I sense some sort of irony that I cannot comprehend... but still just so Kawaii! ^^

I compliment your use of dialog! And I just love mariku in this fic to DEATH! He's just so... Mariku! ^^

Ryou's good too. Actually I'd say he's slightly OCC, but we really don't know anything about him to begin with... And it's supposedly AUish, so yeah. What do I expect out of you people? (Ra knows my first attempt at Ryou will be beyond OCC...)

Unforunately I'm cheating right now, becuase I haven't actually finished and been able to review Crazy For You yet..On chappy 15!) But I had to cheat and see a lemon. It's in my nature. (Oh, and the voices told me to do it! o_o) (lmao xD)

I suppose you did fairly well for the lemon part, though not very descriptiive... (DETAILS RULE ALL FANFICTION!!) But it's not a big red light or anything so you can relax ^^

It was just awesome otherwise.. I mean really, just plain amazing. Bravo. Bravo. (encore! encore! xD)

Overall, it was just epic! You know we love your stories (and things like this especially~!), or anything you write for that matter.


Oh, and we love you too Mariku! ^^

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"Yes, I heard you the fourth time you said it. So shut the Hell up!"

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... ^^;

So yes, I give it two and a half thumbs up, and kudos, and even Ice cream to you! (Yay, Ice cream!)

KUDOS~

-Naito

I read this at midnight and I just felt so good after reading it but that might have bun the fact that I was slightly over imagining the scenes even ones that didn't happen "Taking a shower together" but it was a good read

That is so sweet!!...Please let him out already!!He cwn't stay there forever!!PLEASE,LEASE!If you are writting about them playing twister let them be out in their ouwn space...Marik kind of deserves it...
Lots of love!! And Cookies!!

Uhm... This is nice.. lol

Sorry, it's great I'm just speechless..

It's about stinkin time I guess..

This story is precious! I just love that pairing!

Yay! Happy love-making fluff! I'm doing a jig!*jig* Yayness!

Its a heck of a lot better than my first lemon

*shudder* i dont even wanna think about that thing...*shivrer*

his was your first lemon? you cant tell. Really!

Awesome!

GO DEATHSHIPPING!

Love,
Kuro-san

that was Awsum.
lol i would love to read a story about them playing twister that would be hillarous

It was very good. I am glad they snuck out and are together.

nice..that was your first lemon...as IF!! :P...anyway it was great :)

NOt bad, but..*coughs* You forgot to have them use lube. That is a MUST for this type of sex. Unless I missed it somewhere...

Hee... -tuijottaa ruutua- Minusta tuntuu että kuolasin tässä äsken kaiken nesteen pois suustani, se on ihan kuiva. XD Lemonia..hohohohooh...-perverssi virne- Se oli hyvä, todellakin parempi kuin keski-tason lemon vasta alkajaksi. Ite oon kirjotellu jo muutamia, mutta joutunut polttamaan ne saunanpesässä kun olen saanut selville että isoveljeni käy kaivelemassa laatikoitani. O_O -krhm- muttajoo, sinä et sitte taida päästää ihan heti irti Crazy For You:sta? ^^ Hyvä, älä päästäkkään, minäkin nimittäin haluan nähdä ne pelaamassa twisteriä. XD Iik, jälleen tuli kuvia päähän. XD Hihi. Soriih, meikä vähän väsy, ja suolan humaltama(sipsejä, nyam) Meinaakko muutes kattoa sitä Full Metal Alchemistia joka alkaa nyt suomessakin telkasta tulee? Ite meinaan, parijaksoo veljen kaa kattonu ja on muute helvetin hyvä! XD No jaah, Pidä tämä täällä, ja kirjota isää lemonia vielä. 8D -kikattaa- Lemppareihin muute tämäki menee. Hehe. Bai bai. ^^

Aww, so sweet! You did a great job.