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| Geeky13 2008-09-01 ch 9,  | abuseI love it! |
| lacking a better name 2008-08-24 ch 9, | abuseI loved your story, though I wasn't a big fan of the epilogue. Your writing style was so different and i thought it was kind of mediochre, while in all your earlier chapters your writing was very good. don't get me wrong, i liked how you ended it, just not how you wrote it. All in all, a very good story. |
| majestyvampire55 2008-08-23 ch 9, | abusei loved the ending. and i also love kartik! |
| majestyvampire55 2008-08-23 ch 7, | abusei love the fight part |
| -insert random comment here... 2008-08-20 ch 9, | abuseThat was great! The Ambani family! That's hilarious. |
| SpiderMonkey19 2008-08-04 ch 9, | abuseI am SO naming my next pet potato :] Lovely ending. Its nice to see Gemma and Kartik together :] |
| SpiderMonkey19 2008-08-04 ch 2, | abuseReviews make your writing happier...lol. Well, you already finished but I'll review just the same. Great job!! I love this story :] |
| SpiderMonkey19 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseYay! This is the best AGTB fanfic I've ever read. I've tried so many but they are all just so OOC. Good job!! |
| An.Aria.Of.Moonlight 2008-08-03 ch 9, | abuseAww, the epilogue was cute. Loved it!! Read it all in one sitting (my OCD kicked in). Lots of Love, Alexa -hearts- |
| lalazeimalala 2008-07-27 ch 9, | abuseAmaing story! i loved i so much..to bad it has to end. but it was weird i went to see who wrote the story and the picture looked familiar. Your the one that drew the darling picture of Gemma and Kartik playing guitar hero from devinantart. am i right. anyways your story ws so great i had to read it all in one day : D |
| booksrock 2008-07-12 ch 9, | abuseWow! I really liked it! |
| InfiniteReverie 2008-07-02 ch 7, | abuseHey Catherine! It's been so long, hasn't it? (: Well anyway, I read this fic all over again (this time creating a QuickList on Youtube with all the songs you suggested in the author's note) and I have to say I LOVE IT all over again. It's so adorable and perfect. Argh, why are you so skilled with your words? I seem to have a really bad writer's block now..and can't get anything right. Again, this is lovely and so happy; it makes me happy. (: Ps. You might be wondering why I'm reviewing on this chapter, it's cause I reviewed every other chapter except for this one. LOL. |
| SassyAni 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis chapter is so sweet. And I love how unsure Kartik is of Gemma's feelings. There is only a hint of that in the books, but you show it well. Are they going to do they dirty? |
| IcelandGirl812 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! Every bit of it!! Though the end of the first chapter had me a bit confuzzled...the way she asks him if he wanted to spend the night, then in the beginning of the next chapter she accuses him of "being out for her maidenhood". I was really rather puzzled, and it took me awhile to figure it all out...but all in all it was AMAZING! I'm about to go read your other stories, and I'm anxious to read more from you! |
| Emma 2008-06-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseOMG I just loved the epilogue!! I was confused on one thing- what did this mean: "Those same fingers, that just moments later, performed lewd gestures and measurements the moment her husband turned away." I have a feeling it is sexual and I am just naive but will someone please explain that to me?? Anyways, loved the story! Kartik & Gemma happy tales make my day so much better! You are a great writer |