 angelronin 2009-07-21 . chapter 2Takumi and bondage unusual mix but kind humorous |
 Writersblock14 2008-10-19 . chapter 4These were really good, but i have a question. I'm at the point were Takumi is gone, does he come back? |
 KazeNoSakura 2008-07-24 . chapter 1Hahaha! That was funny! Natsuki's attitude hasn't changed. Thank God! Hehehe. Oh boy, such an energetic boy. He'd be driving me crazy too. I also shutter at the lessons Nao would teach him. |
 sailormoonie17 2007-07-23 . chapter 4Love this chapter!You're very discriptieve. I like smelling things too...^_^'' |
 Ashen Phoenix 2007-06-20 . chapter 2=O_O= Um... woah. I'm glad you made them "at the age of consent" cuzz otherwise I would've been a bit worried. Also, interesting implications for those who know, and fairly light for those who don't. All in all I think you handled that "borderline R rating" very well. ^_^ |
 Ashen Phoenix 2007-06-20 . chapter 1Huzzah! Good plotline, and I'm glad you're keeping to-- AND enhancing-- the characters' personalities! This is the first AkiraxTakumi fic I've found! Sheesh. Not that I don't like 'em, but everyone keeps writing NatsukixShizuru ones. |
 sailormoonie17 2007-05-08 . chapter 3That was so awesome! I love all your chapters. Hahaha, you have to update soon!! |
 Vld 2007-05-03 . chapter 3*snickers* Cool! I almost saw Tom Cruise enter the fray too! Hey, that could be a fun chapter! Tom (or whatever his name was in "Cocktail") comes to wherever Akira is working at the time, having heard of her reputation, and challenges her to a Cocktail-mixing match. |
 Vld 2007-05-03 . chapter 1Or thankful that he doesn't take lessons from either Haruka or Shizuru... *shudder* That would be fun, though. |
 marashapeshifter 2007-04-27 . chapter 3I like how Akira is confident of her own abilities. It really sounds like her.
I wonder what Takumi thinks of Akira's new job? :D |
 Amy 2007-04-23 . chapter 1 Oh, the hell Takumi must send his sister and girlfriend through. Poor them. |
 Omnicat 2007-04-14 . chapter 2To speak with Nao: Mrauw! Me likes, and will be very pleased if you write more. =^.^= |
 Von 2007-03-04 . chapter 2 Funny! Nice work. It made me giggle xD |
 The.Hoppy 2007-02-27 . chapter 2Akira...what? Well, that's an interesting chapter summary. To read or not to read...
...Scarves. Scarves and- damn. This is your fault, you annoying (wonderful) author. Now I'm blushing. But that was fun. Though, technically speaking, you could have slid by with a T.
~Naolin |
 The.Hoppy 2007-02-27 . chapter 1Ah Natsuki. So graceful, so cool, so quick to bristle. This leaves me wondering what Nao's lessons would consist of... This is the sleep lack's fault. Gah.
~Naolin |