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| Axel.VIII Roxas.XIII 2008-08-19 ch 20,  | abuseBravo~ Very good ending to an amazing story!! |
| Suigin Mitsukai 2008-08-18 ch 20, | abuse:D i really liked the ending and stuff. super cute :D |
| Suigin Mitsukai 2008-08-18 ch 17, | abusewow i think its amazing how well you blended in the real kh story into this modern one. its flawless and seamless, and its positively wonderful!! well, i guess i'll just have to keep reading.. and i finished the first 10ish chapters in one day, its that good :D |
| DearJamie 2008-08-17 ch 20, | abuseooh. i've been menaing to read this story for a long time, but i haven't had thhe actual time to do it, except now and ooh, it was good x3 so many parts i loved and in this last chapte ri felt like crying xD but it was awesome. loved the part where axel said in the beginning "I've never touched you but still i remember a dozen ways to make you moan my name" xD and how Dem and Axel got to know each other xD also the part where they caught Dem and Zexion on the couch xD hilarious awesome work :D |
| Lipgloss-x-lies 2008-08-09 ch 20, | abuseFantastic story! Extremely well written with a great plot line. |
| dragontwin99 2008-08-04 ch 20, | abuseAbsolutely amazing, I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter :) |
| DooBaaDee 2008-07-27 ch 20, | abuseAbsolutely incredible. |
| Fiesta Butterfly 2008-07-22 ch 20, | abuseAh, good, I though that Axel was really going to die or something. Well, that was a great story and te ending was just fantastic. |
| Fiesta Butterfly 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abuseLOL! This is going to get interesting. Roxas is so going to get his ass kick by Sora... Or will he? |
| Fiesta Butterfly 2008-07-21 ch 6, | abuseGreat, the story is coming along well. |
| AGENT RACH 2008-07-21 ch 20, | abuseAwness. That was amazing. |
| LittleLoneLiar 2008-07-17 ch 20, | abuseThis was amazing. The story line wasn't original, hell, my storylines aren't original, but this is something special. The characterization you gave these characters, gives it something new that was invigorating to read. I started reading it at 11:00 this morning, and it refused to let me leave it alone. I now feel invigorated,Happy,deppressed, in a KH Obbsession(I had been in a slump latlly. Just needed a break), and the need to pee. You're writing has probably inspired many fanarts, and storys to be writen, because this is damn /inspiring/, man. seriously. Good Job. L L L |
| Goggie 2008-07-15 ch 20, | abuseScrew the disclaimer! By my book this story owned every last one of the characters :P Definitely one of my favorite stories. I love how you included all their KH experiences into their AU lives. Very, very original! ...The lemons were fucking orgasmic |
| anonymous ;) 2008-07-14 ch 20, anon. | abuseThis is the second time I've read through this story and I jsut had to review. It was absolutely wonderful; I loved how you characterized everyone, blending aspects of their original personalities with your own style. The plot flowed smoothly and I liked how the other characters from the series interacted with Axel and Roxas. You gave them depth and I jsut loved the style. It's become one of my favorites and I'm sure I'll be reading it again. Thanks so much for sharing it :) |
| kyunyu 2008-07-13 ch 20, | abuseWow….just wow O_O. You’re one of the few authors that seem to be able to catch the essence of the characters they’re trying to depict perfectly. This is definitely the best re-incarnation akuroku fic that I’ve read. Give yourself a pat on the pack you deserve it after writing something amazing like this =)! Thanks for taking the time to write this fic, I enjoyed every second of it (even though I nearly had a minor heart attack when I read chapter 19 XD). |