Nice story, it's good to see Kyle's story expanded on.

Fantastic! You've got a real talent for voicing the inside thoughts of these characters - even the not-so-suave ones. I particularly liked Duarte's "Jake is the one who freaks out" thought; although you would think Kyle's always cool and confident, he definitely has an inner neurotic basketcase.

Keep up the good work!

Bub, you are excellent at this. You manage to capture the spirit of the characters and create scenarios that could, and would look awesome, in the the Series. it's a shame I'm not the guy who makes the jake 2.0 plot, cause I'd definitely use this. After asking you first.

Great job. can't wait for your next scenario.

HEY! You finally updated! Nice writing! What is Jake 2.0? :/

You have gift with words. So much conveyed in so little space.

Cool fic, but it is much too short! FYI, did you know in Japan they don't call them chopsticks? They're called 'hashi' - pronounced pretty much like it's spelled. We had a foreign exchange student from Japan for almost a year, and we learned a lot of interesting things!

Interesting...can't wait to read more. ;)

I like the start of this story. It's going to be fun seeing where you will take it.

Oh yeah, welcome to Jake 2.0. It's been lonely in here lately.