Excellent.

Interesting.

Great poem! Just one question, is Danny still talking from lines 8-16, because you switch povs. At first it was first person and then it switched to second person. It sounds like someone is talking to Danny instead of Danny talking to the audience. Just wondering.

Interesting.

Again, great poem.

Wow...interesting poem about Danny. I liked the third line best.

P.S. Door hinge rhymes with orange! ;p

Very nice (although the title lead me to believe it was going to end with some sort of joke about oranges).

That was really well done. Shortbread for you! Question time: Was the person talking Danny, someone else, then Danny again? That's what I got from it, mind letting me know? Or leave me in suspense. Either way, I can't wait to read what else you've got. Great job.