 JJ Rust 2009-07-03 . chapter 1Cool and unique story. I grew to really, really like Pippa in a very short amount of time. "Patriotically-drunken model." Love that line. Pippa is definitely more fun-loving and spontaneous than Fleur. I can only imagine how they will rock out to "Pachebel's Canon in D," one of my favorite pieces of classical music.
One typo I caught: "a one Bill Weasley" should be "one Bill Weasley."
Fun story. Good job. |
 Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2007-03-12 . chapter 1oh, that was FUNNY. hahaha, now you just need a friend of Pippa's to come in and play the key board! hahaha. I remember how to play that on the piano, lol. That's pretty sad, considering I played it more than a year ago. That was funny! |