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Reviews For: MaKayla's Anatomy - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

ga-4-ever
2007-07-07
ch 11,
abuseHi,
I love your story and can't wait to read the sequel..
TeamMD
2007-07-03
ch 6,
abuseLoved it
gagaoverGA
2007-06-30
ch 11,
abusegreat job with the final chapter. the wedding scene was amazing ... made me swoon! and you were able to bring closure to everyone's storylines. it was great to read about what happened to everyone else!

this was an enjoyable read, brandy! congratulations! i do hope you continue with the sequel, coz there are still tons of amazing possibilities to explore ... like mac and alex having a baby (how's that for a hint LOL i actually want to see merder as grandparents), etc. eagerly anticipating your meralex story as well, so please update soon.

again, congratulations on a job well done, brandy!
gagaoverGA
2007-06-30
ch 10,
abuseokay, have to admit that i thought she was pregnant while reading the first paragraph LOL i waited with bated breath till the end to see if she really was ... disappointed when there was no mention of it :P LOL oh, well, there's still the next chapter

it was nice to see you include the backstory of addison's place in all this, giving us a clearer picture as to what had happened in the past, and it was a very brilliant idea to do so (present that backstory) through the court proceedings. great idea, brandy!

that was a nice way to end the chap ... i liked that you showed her friendship with george as well. i enjoy scenes like that. :)

can't wait to see how you're ending this ...
gagaoverGA
2007-06-30
ch 8,
abuseokay, so many things to say that i don't know where to start.

well, guess ill start with ... OMG she got shot! and addie was the one who shot her! oh my! for a while there my heart was racing so fast that i thought i was going to have an anxiety attack! please don't ever do that again LOL only started to relax when she woke up! oh, and you shouldn't have made derek prevent alex from attacking dr. lee ... wanted to strangle her myself. see what you've done to me ... and im not usually a violent person LOL and that last scene with alex and mer was really sweet and touching.

thanks heaps for the mertina scene ... i could totally see them having that kind of conversation. good job with that.

please note:
*why is this chap9 again? i remember that i already reviewed till chap9, and i received a message from FF saying the same thing, which is why i'm using chap8 to submit my review. did you delete a chap somewhere?
*in one paragraph, you used 'brandy' instead of makayla ... got thrown off for a bit, until i realized you meant mac.
*yeah, isnt that awful about benoit? even my son felt depressed about his death. sorry :(

thanks for the update, or updates rather. finally! and it's even more terrific that you posted three chaps at once. off to read what happens next. great chap, brandy!
gagaoverGA
2007-06-07
ch 9,
abusepoor alex ... now mark is in on the threats as well!

i was hoping addie wasn't going to be too much of a "bad guy" coz i really love her.

this may be irrelevant but meredith said they'd been married for 20 years and mac is 25. typo?

i know you said there are only three chaps left, but i'm hoping to see you write about the mertina and mark-merder friendships.

good job with this, and looking forward to more!
gagaoverGA
2007-06-07
ch 6,
abusethat was cute ... mcdreamy being all protective and threatening. i was expecting him to pull out his shotgun! LOL.

hey, mcstizzie!
gagaoverGA
2007-06-07
ch 5,
abuseholy crap! both of them were married to her? wow! that's a twist i haven't come across before (in GA fanfic anyway)! great idea!
gagaoverGA
2007-06-07
ch 4,
abusewho was calling alex?!? why did he not answer the call?
gagaoverGA
2007-06-07
ch 3,
abusewow, getting busy in the on-call room already. LOL

where's meredith in all this? is she not a surgeon in SGH too?
gagaoverGA
2007-06-07
ch 2,
abuseLOL. mac's got derek's signature mcdreamy smile! now i'm curious as to how she looks like. since i'm only on chap2, maybe you went itno more detail about her appearance in the later chaps.

is izzie with cristina because she 'bullied' mac? LOL
gagaoverGA
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abusei have to admit i got a little confused at first (when all their names were called) until i read the entire chapter. this is an interesting storyline ... very creative! curious to see how MaKayla will fare with this crazy bunch!
ga-4-ever
2007-05-22
ch 9,
abuseHi,
I'm so happy that you finally updated your story and I really, really like that chapter and I'm happy that Alex asked Mac if she would marry him (that's so romantic!)...
But Addison...
Update and I'd like to have a sequel!
McDreamyisDreamy
2007-05-21
ch 9,
abuseHey I really like and hope you will add the last 3 chapters. I am also looking foreward to the squeal.

Great chapter!!
McDreamyisDreamy
2007-05-18
ch 1,
abuseI think you should really update and soon! I really like you story and want to know what is going to happen next!
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