Good ending! not too mushy, but says enough.

Good writing!

JadeAshes (JA)

Okay... *coughs* OOC *coughs* Ahem. Well, all in all, it wasn't a bad story. I mean the beginning did sound like Raven, but the ending is a little messed up. In my opinion, Raven should casually walk over to him, give him a quick kiss on the cheek, and casually walk out, leaving four dumfounded titans in silence until BB says something funny, the end... but hey, I'm not the author, that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work. Write on!

hahahahahahahahahah awesome!

Ending:
Raven runs up to Beastboy, wraps her arms around him, and kisses him passionatly on the lips. Everyone was just staring. Beastboy finally figured out what was going on, and kissed her back. when they finally broke free raven stares deeply into beastboy's eyes and says "I love yo Beastboy."
"I love you too raven."
And they all lived happily ever after.

i don't care if u dont use it, it was off the top of my head. you can use it if u want to though... I havent written any fanfics of my own to put this scene into. allwell. toodles!