That is soo sad. Hands you a kleenex*..

aw, you made me cry reading this! Thats so not fair! Yoou never cry reading my things! hump!

mumble*just had to show off didnt you*mubble

sweet story

That was very sad. Too bad they couldn't be together.

lol tha was good...i thought that i was Ryou that died o.0 lol...guess i was worng...or i was right...or i was worng lol :P...anyway it was god

I liked this concept, and I thought it was really depressing.(which is a good thing, considering what you were going for) And fortunatly this wasn't exactly a songfic! I think sometimes it's okay to use ideas from songs, but definitely not to copy the whole thing by pasting lyrics and inserting names, lol! You didn't do that, so good for you! XP

Aww, sad!