great story :)

aw ! that was so cute ! i loved it . good job .

i love it there first kiss took them forver lol

Another great chapter. You're a really good writer. And about the order of the chapters: it's not confusing at all, actually i kinda liked the out-of-order-ness (if that's a word). :)

That was so great! I could really visualize the story line while reading it. :)

OF course you should continue it,it's awesome!

i really liked it

aw. so cute. love it

aww! i loved it! i didnt think it was that corny. it was cute. as for your next story, i think you should embelish their first kiss a little more. just an idea. i cant wait to read your next story! :D

I really liked the story. Yea it was a little cheesy but cheesy is good somtimes and in this case it was fantastic!

i absolutley adore this story. i hope you decide to update. lol. im smileing at this story i like it so much. you have to updtate so that i could find out what happens!

sorry about your back. But i love your story so please update!

i caught that hint, thank you for an excellent story. continue please

y r chap 1 and 2 r they supposed to be switched?

my favorite line: “You know, my friend, for a photographer you can be pretty blind sometimes.” i loved that line! lol, i may wanna steal it (if you say i can :D) i love this story! cant wait to see what is going to happen next! update soon!