FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| csimiamifreako 2007-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseSTORY, GOOD, BUT THAT WAS MEAN LEAVING WHERE YOU DID, ILL BE EXPECTING A SEQUEL! LOL! GREAT, MORE! MORE! MORE! |
| CrashxIn2xMe 2007-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abusei love your little series you have going here. pleeasee continue!! |
| xyber116 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseYippie! H/C! There so totally needs to be more. |
| randomwriting 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseReally nicely done. I think you've captured Horatio very well. Loved Eric's, Alexx's and Calleigh's roles in this, as well. Love this line, 'He’d had about as much as he could take of Horatio’s new-found invincibility.' Haven't we all? And this one, 'You look like you have been carrying everybody else’s problems on your shoulders so you can bury your own…”' Kudos! |
| Lerrinus 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseAw, right on! So many great scenes and lines, spectacular writing all around! *happy sigh* :-) |
| Lady aracne 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abusegreat! I love it, please update really soon!! |
| Jessica237 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseYay! I was so excited to see a follow-up to 1190 Miles! This was lovely. :) It's about time Horatio's recklessness caught up with him, and I'm so glad to see Calleigh was there for him, despite her own obligations. Shows where her heart really is. ;) You did an excellent job with this. :) |
| ath3ns 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abusethat was nice!...crazy H..I hope he won't have problem with alcohol in the later stories!..heh!..;p!..update soon!.. ehm,this is a bit out of the story,but are you planning on continuing Semper Fidelis?;} |
| Shining Zephyr 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuse-crying is heard- I never thought he would lose it like that to alcohol! Beautiful! Shiny-san |