 D.J. Scales 2009-10-15 . chapter 20Now that's and ending. |
 NinjaSheik 2009-09-10 . chapter 10I LOVE THIS~!! I LOVE AMBER AND SKULKER PAIRINGS! |
 Ghostface317 2009-08-02 . chapter 20I like the idea of a Crossover with Ghost Rider. If you do the crossover, you should set it when they are in college, and go DEEPER into Danny & Sam's relationship and cover things like, marriage. Good Fan-Fic though. |
 Marcus S. Lazarus 2008-09-11 . chapter 20It’s stories like this that confirm what Terry Pratchett once wrote; “Men who can invent things that anyone could have thought of are very rare men”.
This crossover concept is something so obvious that almost ANYONE could have written it, and yet you have not only beaten them all to it, you went into GREAT detail explaining how the Ghostbusters’ ghostly encounters can take place in the same universe as Danny’s given the drastic differences between the two types of ghosts (You know, Danny’s ghosts typically being based around a specific ‘theme’- Ember had music, Nocturne sleep, Technus technology, that kind of thing- while the Ghostbusters tackle ancient ghosts with myth-like powers).
Which isn’t to say that the personal interaction moments between the groups didn’t work out well; on the contrary, the Fentons’ reactions to Slimer in particular was very amusing, to say nothing of the Ghostbusters’ more casual reaction to the discovery of Danny’s true identity.
And as for the crisis they ended up having to confront (Seriously, why does Vlad NEVER learn from his mistakes; you’d think after Pariah Dark nearly destroyed him he’d have realised that some ghosts just CAN’T be controlled)…
DAMN, that was cool.
Morbius definitely made for a VERY disturbing villain, while simultaneously possessing a certain tragic aspect to his history that made it at least slightly possible to sympathise with his motives even if you didn’t agree with his methods.
Plus, of course, the part where Morbius actually ‘managed’ to ‘resurrect’ his wife certainly added to his theme of tragedy; the guy was so desperate to get her back that he didn’t even register that he DIDN’T have her back at all.
Oh, and your use of Clockwork won you more than a few points; I always liked that guy as a character, and wouldn’t have minded seeing him help Danny out more than he actually did in the show.
Well, keep up the good work; I DEFINITELY wouldn’t mind seeing another crossover of this calibre (Actually, the Ghost Rider thing you mentioned at the end of this story sounds like it has DEFINITE potential; any chance you’ll be writing it sooner or later?) |
 Thunderstorm101 2007-11-25 . chapter 20The entire fic was full of typos. Your grammer left much to be desired. You didn't use nearly enough commas. I almost got a headach reading this thing. Your descriptions weren't all that good.
The story, however, was pure gold, and good enough that EVEN THOUGH all of your mistakes and butchery of the English language would ordniarily be enough to stop me from ever considering this idea, I'm putting this story in my C2.
Take it how you will... |
 Moriko no Hikari 2007-08-22 . chapter 20I say go for the Ghost Rider thing. If you wanna see some awesome Danny pics go to YouTube and type in Danny Phantom Anime. It's cool, there's one where he's kissing Sam in front of the Portal and one with a seriously nice armor.Check it out! |
 DPhantom2.0 2007-08-21 . chapter 20 awsome, a sequel would be a great idea, hope to read more of your work soon |
 Manyara 2007-08-20 . chapter 20Can't wait for the next installment. |
 Sparky Genocide 2007-08-14 . chapter 20 Great epilogue!
It appears things are going to be same-old/same-old for the Ghostbusters. But Danny, his friends and his family will never be the same, but things appear that they will be for the better.
I'm glad that Val has had some closure with Danny and accepted the fact that he's with Sam. I'm also glad that Tucker finally has a date, which means Danny and Sam won't find their trio awkward.
Of course, the situation with Egon and Janine is routine, which is okay and funny. Janine will win this game of chess.
I thought it was funny how the mayor was reluctant about giving credit to Danny Phantom and the Fentons. The Fentons of course are known idiots. Plus, the mayor doesn't have reason to believe Danny is a good guy since that episode with Walker. But that was Walker's fault, not Danny's. But now that it looks like it won't be long before the...ugh...new "mayor" shows his face. That's right, I'm talking about Vlad.
Good work! Take care and good luck with your future projects. |
 Moony's Metamorphmagus 2007-08-14 . chapter 20That's cool. Some stories are better without sequels. I do find the concept of 'The Ghost Child and the Ghost Rider' would be cool. I did run across a DP story once where Danny sold his soul to the devil to save his father (who then died when a ghost weapon malfunctioned). It's in my C2. Somewhere. Hm. I'll see you around! |
 Diabolus Regnum 2007-08-13 . chapter 20excellent, pure genius. i hope you do write that danny phantomxghost rider, it would make one hell of a story, i had the idea too, dabbled a bit, but couldnt write a story that sat well with me, i hope you have better luck, i cant wait to read it if you choose to write it. write on |
 slickboy444 2007-08-12 . chapter 20Nice ending man. A fitting close to an enjoyable story. I liked how the Ghostbusters closed things off with the Mayor. As tough as the fight against Morbius was, collecting the bill had to be a sweet moment. lol Very fitting and given the damage done I can only shutter at the cost. But I guess that's a number best left for the imagination. lol Glad Danny and Tucker got to talk about Sam. It's sure to take some adjusting in their group dynamics. But given how long it took they should be fine. It's good to see Valerie coming around as well. Meeting the Ghostbusters really helped change her views about ghost. But one thing I would have liked to see is Slimer give her a hug. lol That would have been fitting. So now things seem to be returning to a sense of normalcy. The Ghostbusters have their fight and the Fentons have theirs. Again, nice job man. Your first Danny Phantom fic can be considered a success. Way to go. Slickboy out. |
 X00001 2007-08-12 . chapter 20great chapter loved the end and glad its over really liked this story. i can't wait to find out what you've got planned next keep up the good work man. |
 Psycho King 2007-08-12 . chapter 20(rounding standing ovation goes around)
congradulations, this has truely been a story worth reading |
 Laser Crusader 2007-08-09 . chapter 19Sorry for the delay in the review. I have been occupied with other matters. So what can I say about this chapter. It was beautiful. The end of Morbius was nicely done. I found the Slimer and Tissue scene to be completely hillarious.
Questions
1. If you write a sequel chapter would the major bad guy be Gozer? Since technically I don't think the Ghostbusters destroyed her, they just sent her back where she came from. |