It seems to be heading in a good direction, but please- don't make Sasuke into too much of a ... and now how do I say it since likes to '...' such words? Oh well. Who-re. Maybe that will do the trick. ;)

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Luna Lunak

Well, the plot is very good, and I'd like to see more of it. But I suppose there's no rush anyway, so...yeah.

ok, when i read the line that says-
"Naruto, who, after getting turned down by Sakura for the millionth time, was currently dating Lee"
i was like WHAT THE HELL?! in a chanel sort of way. and so many things in this just made me raise my eyebrow and go WTHF? but other than that it was good.

hold on! why's it rated M? theres nothing in it yet!

Dolu: *woots for Haley's story*

Lo: Sorry Rosie, but sasUKE is everyone's bitch.