It makes you wanna fall in love!

Aw another incredibly cute one!^^ Love it! There are some slight grammar mistakes like when you didn't capitalize Tomoyo's name (lol), but besides that it's great.

Love the story! I think you should write more!

well at least they are happy expect some of them..hmm..very interesting one shot...well bye..bye...:D...

It was ok. The only thing that urged me to write this is the fact that you put Syao-Chan at the end. You do realize that -chan at the end of names is only for females, usually young.

It is a bit late for Christmas... but anyway, I liked it! Nice one!