 The Cat Crusader 2007-11-19 . chapter 1I thought this was wonderful, sad but wonderful. *wipes away tear* I agree with 'Deathscythe hei123' 100 percent! :D |
 Shadows Light 2007-07-29 . chapter 1Poor Alexis :( |
 Deathscythe hiei123 2007-07-13 . chapter 1I really love this story! To tell you the truth I like the pairing myself. Starscream/Alexis is cute in many ways the cold tough guy and the sweet girl who saw something more. Or it could be just me. Anywho...unlike the other two comments the feeling of sadness is what makes this short story great, well bye bye ( DO ANOTHER ARMADA FANFIC!) ~ Deathchan |
 Foxx 2007-06-01 . chapter 1 IT DOES NEED MORE FICS! i love the coupling! i think you kept them all in character rather well, if i do say so myself, and i like it. ^^ *claps happily* |
 starscream girl 2007-03-23 . chapter 1starscream girl= wah(tears streaming out)
i hate it when these stories make me cry!
(screams) I LOVE YOU STARSCREAM, I LOVE YOU! DONT LEAVE ME!
(shivers) wah!
commander hawk= *grins* hey well i loved it. i dont like him, so die! muhahahaha
starcream= (shoots commander hawk with null rays) thats what you get feeme.
(screamer looks around to see starscream girl in a corner shaking and crying)
(walks over)
starscream= hey you okay? hon!?
starscream girl= (turns over and hugs him)
(whisper) dont ever leave me..
starscream= i wont...
commander hawk= ow, great thanks alot. well we love it, grammar was good to. but to starscream girl perspetive was just to sad. whispers! she very sensitive about screamer. |
 AlphaSigma 2007-02-04 . chapter 1that was wonderful but could you make one not so ... sad? but i still loved it |