WHOA. It would have been nice to have some warning in the summary that this was yaoi.. but, since I read it, I'll review it. I personally do not like yaoi at all.. but the fanfiction in itself was written very well. You have good talent, keep it up. Perhaps, if you write another pokemon fic someday, I'll read that one too, as long as it isn't yaoi. _ lol, it kinda freaked me out at the end..

DUH! Well, you knocked me back a few lightyears with that one! No comments on the content (I *hate* Yaoi pairings) but well done on the build up. I half convinced myself that it was Brock and someone... maybe Suzie and he had been summoned by Misty to join Ash and her on the road once more. BenRG's Rating 8/10