i luv this story. Keep up the good work. By the way i have a few stories of my own but I don't knw hw to post. Can you please tell me.

i think it should be number 3

An interesting read if I do say so myself! A little hard to read in some spots what with the grammatical and spelling errors but it was still good!

DUDE YOU NEED HELP THE HELL IS THE MATTER WITH YOU?

ignore my friend above. (not psycho) kay, but the age difference was only a bit scary.

OK IT WASNT THAT BAD BUT DUDE THE AGE DIFFERENCE WAS MASSIVE HE 68 AND SHE 17 DO YOU KNOW HOW DISTURBING THAT IS BUT OTHERWISE AWSOME STORY JUST TRY TO MAKE THE AGE DIFFERENCE NO MORE THEN 12 YEARS K

i say fiffteen years max! but i did like the story, just dead bulma was scary. lol

Great Story Keep Up The Good Work

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VegetasAngel

I love the plot! Unusual in a good way. Great story!

Arigato!

Saki