I must admit I've forgotten some parts of this story, but I'll re-read it as soon as I have some free time.
The reason I decided to review nevertheless is that I enjoyed this chapter very much. You did a good job showing us their emotions.
I do have one little suggestion, though. I find POV tags (in general, not just here) a bit sloppy. I think the author has to find another, more natural way to tell (or rather show) us whose mind we're in.
Hope you'll update sooner this time. :)

Oh my welcome back! I'm so happy I remember thinking a while back that this story would go down as unfinished in the archives. Awesome, I like the way you write your stories - you have mastered something I haven't and that is capturing the emotions very well with short chapters and a few words. What a fantastic chapter to come back on as well! The only real critism I have for this is at the very beginning when Jordan is addressed by the ambos as Miss - now I'm pretty sure Jordan would deck anyone who called her that instead of Doctor due to her character, and one more thing is she would have been aware on some level of what the ambos were saying the doctor in her would have taken it on through auto-pilot - and it's more like Jordan to want to know what's going on - she has a passion for the truth.
Other than that I love this story... The sensitivity with which you wrote about God in the beginning was touching, and the way you've captured the emotion in this particular chapter: "Tears came to my eyes as I forced myself to turn to face him." "... paused with my back to his bed. That's when I heard it; I heard his plea." "I realised that his look wasn't for himself but for me." Sigh, great writing! Awesome. Thank you for starting up a story again after such a long time. x Kat

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Cool story, update soon!

I love this story but I didn't understand the last paragraph with the nurses and the disaster. May be it could be because I'm from Germany, but may be the next chapter would tell me more about this. But I love your story! blackrose538

So good! But why does Jordan not want to be with Woody? :(

Omg you have to update son! =]

OH THANK GOD U UPDATED!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE! *begs*

I am really enjoying your story and can't wait to find out what happens to Woody and whether Jordan stays or runs. I sure hope she stays! Update us soon, please!

ah!
i must know!

add more?
please??

That was so cut please keep writing some more please I want to find out some more information for this story

Jordan being stuck in Woody's room is so symbolic. Her heart and soul are truly stuck with Woodrow Wilson Hoyt whether she wants to admit it or not :)
Please update soon. This should be interesting to see how she will handle(or not) ths situation. Temper tantrum? Panic attack?Both?

Fun first chapter.
I could picture the pure hatred in Woody's eyes.
Sorry he had to get hurt. Hope you fix him :)
On to chapter two...