I LOVED IT WRITE MORE

woah seriously?! SPONGUEBOB?!

hm...i i were about to die i would load up on fattie foods and eat till i puke

Love the ending!That would make a funny story if they did kill each other!Your stories to funny!

I did that once.I was shaving my legs and my mom banged on the door and startled me.I had a huge gask on my leg.People kept asking if I was cutting myself!

AW I love jacks present!

OMG!I had no idea he was spongebob!Thats too funny!

What?! Tom Kenny also does Raimundo and Eduardo?! O.o I know a lot of the voices he does but those two?? WOW! They don't sound like his voice much at all..

LOL

Hehe cute. Wonder how Chase reacted when he realized Jack and Rai were in a relationship anyway.

so you are a fabulous artist, an amazing writer, and NOW YOU WRITE SONGS TOO? is there anything you DONT do?!

well loved this fic too... and i really like this pairing. there aren't many good rai/jack fics so thanks. i think my fav chaps are 2-3 cause omi is just so adorable, and i love exasperated!rai. great!

The epilogue made me go "xD".
So did most of it, actually.
YAY FOR ANTI JACK/RAI ANGST~!

this story was an inspiration to me. once i read it i couldn't stop. this story rocks. you should write a sequal to this one!!

That was exremely creative. I didn't even think of the Wu. Great job!

Aww thats so cute! And Jack playing the guitar is such a hott thought. lol