 Loony Tuner 2009-12-11 . chapter 9 That was a really sweet ending to the chapter. It gives you the warm fuzzies all over. |
 BlackRoseFire 2009-09-19 . chapter 9Awesome. I can't wait until the next chapter. |
 Kitsuru 2009-09-02 . chapter 9This is fantastic so far, can't wait for an update! Especially the last line of this chapter, my roommate currently thinks I've lost my mind because I AWed out loud. XD |
 PaulRap Raptor 2009-08-18 . chapter 8Interesting. |
 .'Angelito soldado'. 2009-08-11 . chapter 9Haha nice!
Very good! |
 narutos vixen 2009-08-10 . chapter 9whoa most storys hiashi is a bastard but hes cool in this one...do you plan on updatting in this? |
 Silver Warrior 2009-08-10 . chapter 9wait wait wait. Hinata DOESN'T know? And yet she fooled them? Oh that's brilliant! |
 PaulRap Raptor 2009-08-10 . chapter 9Keep up the good work. |
 RasenganFin 2009-08-10 . chapter 9I'm sure we are all proud of Hinata. |
 Dragon Man 180 2009-08-10 . chapter 9Hehehehe, go Hinata! Hiashi is actually proud of her! I can't wait to see her reaction to actually finding out about the fox. I suggest she shrugs it off with a "So What?" And I pity any elder she catches actively trying to hurt Naruto, I can't see Hinata standing for that and trying to stop the elder as quick as she can if Tsunade doesn't beat her to the punch. |
 Starfire99 2009-08-10 . chapter 9You really need to speed up these chapter releases. It's taken you over 2 1/2 years to put out only 9 chapters. I've seen people put up nearly 100 chapters in that time frame. You need to get your release time down to no less than 1 chapter per month. That's a perfectly reasonable time frame and what most authors can do with ease. |
 HIMandHERnotTHEM 2009-08-10 . chapter 9Yay, you updated! This was great! Loved the ending part! Great job! |
 FallenFox15 2009-08-10 . chapter 9cool |
 Light as Air 2009-08-09 . chapter 9I really do appreciate your writing skills, very nice. I like Naruto and Hinata. It was a wonderful story to read. Good job my friend. |
 Kage Husha 2009-08-09 . chapter 9Welcome back...nice to see a new chapter. Too short, but good. I especially like the last scene with Hinata and Hiashi. Priceless. |