That was a really sweet ending to the chapter. It gives you the warm fuzzies all over.

Awesome. I can't wait until the next chapter.

This is fantastic so far, can't wait for an update! Especially the last line of this chapter, my roommate currently thinks I've lost my mind because I AWed out loud. XD

Interesting.

Haha nice!
Very good!

whoa most storys hiashi is a bastard but hes cool in this one...do you plan on updatting in this?

wait wait wait. Hinata DOESN'T know? And yet she fooled them? Oh that's brilliant!

Keep up the good work.

I'm sure we are all proud of Hinata.

Hehehehe, go Hinata! Hiashi is actually proud of her! I can't wait to see her reaction to actually finding out about the fox. I suggest she shrugs it off with a "So What?" And I pity any elder she catches actively trying to hurt Naruto, I can't see Hinata standing for that and trying to stop the elder as quick as she can if Tsunade doesn't beat her to the punch.

You really need to speed up these chapter releases. It's taken you over 2 1/2 years to put out only 9 chapters. I've seen people put up nearly 100 chapters in that time frame. You need to get your release time down to no less than 1 chapter per month. That's a perfectly reasonable time frame and what most authors can do with ease.

Yay, you updated! This was great! Loved the ending part! Great job!

cool

I really do appreciate your writing skills, very nice. I like Naruto and Hinata. It was a wonderful story to read. Good job my friend.

Welcome back...nice to see a new chapter. Too short, but good. I especially like the last scene with Hinata and Hiashi. Priceless.