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| LilyEvans777 2008-05-08 ch 6,  | abuseOh! I soo want to see what the tests are! I love this fic, I hope you can update it soon! Regards, me =) LOL |
| Raptor2001 2008-05-01 ch 6, | abusenaruto face Whole Huugya ..if he want to marry Hinata ... poor naruto but good thing , he dont give up easily!! |
| Raptor2001 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abusepoor naruto was trap by three girls... blame on naruto becasue he ask it |
| Dragon Man 180 2008-04-28 ch 6, | abuseStupid elders, I hope Naruto breezes through the tests and proves himself worthy of Hinata! Sakura, Ino, and Tenten really came through! I can't wait to see how things go from here! |
| jojoma-kitsune 2008-04-28 ch 6, | abuseme likey |
| Ancient Kyubi 2008-04-28 ch 6, | abuseOk I just read all these chapters AND "So who's holding the leash?" so it's all in this one review... First off "So who's holding the leash?" was a great story and funny as hell, especially the end when Kiba showed them all the video I was cracking up. I was happy that Hinata fessed up her love and Naruto returned it all the same... Now for this story: This is getting good, I love how Hinata and Naruto's relationship has grown and I love what it became... Now I'm just hoping Naruto can pass these tests and win the heart of Hinata... Also I can't help but wonder what will happen with the whole situation involving the whole rookie nine and their investigation of Naruto in the last story... Will he be accepted by all... or will someone have something new to say?... Please update soon cuz you have a great story here ^.^ |
| Theo Hart 2008-04-28 ch 6, | abuseSurprisingly well written. Very nice. Thanks for your work! ^_^ |
| Shawny Wong 2008-04-28 ch 6, | abuseThis was very well written. I could almost feel the tension, though Naruto restrained himself admirably. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Kage Husha 2008-04-28 ch 6, | abuseGood chapter. Glad I could help you finish writing it *poke, poke*. Keep up the good work! |
| Sdarian 2008-03-10 ch 5, | abuseThis has been a pretty good story overall, but you really shouldn't have broken it into different pieces. You didn't end the first story, you just slapped a 'complete' on it and left it up to the readers to decide weither or not there was more too it, and then had to find it. You should have, at the very least, stated that there was going to be a sequel in the author's notes. But, I still stand by my opinion that this shouldn't be two different stories. You simply didn't finish the last one, just stopped working on it right in the middle. Anyway, good luck on more chapters. |
| Relden Calder 2008-03-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseMost excellent indeed. It's damned frustrating trying to find a NaruHina story that isn't just: "NARUHINA FTW KAWAII!!1!" with severe OoC-ness. This story looks like it's had real thought put into it, and of course, the element that every great romance needs, a little "will-they-won't-they" schtick. It even has some humor. That makes it a win in my opinion. I hope this keeps going, and I'm looking forward to new chapters. |
| diadem15 2008-01-22 ch 5, | abusegreat story, more please |
| naruto1x5 2008-01-09 ch 5, anon. | abuser u going to up date the story any time soon i really want to know what happends |
| flavoroftheday 2007-10-03 ch 5, | abusejo just want to say that i love story and cant wait tthe see the next one |
| xo4evagurlox 2007-09-24 ch 5, | abuseTotally love it!! I can't wait until you update, so do it soon! It is so awesome, and absolutely cute! NaruHina 4 EVA CHYA! ~xo4evagurlxo |