Loved it :)

amazing story, you've really left me wanting more.

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Wow! this is really good.

It's so well written I feel like I'm loose sanity too. (that's was supposed to be a compliment even if it doesn't sound like one.)

good story

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

something spechal indeed lol. the raw emotion in this chappter was fantastic. this is by far one of my fave chapters, poor cloud, that was so sad. hope you can update again soon

Sabith

that was a very cute chapter. im so glad you have found the time to update, i really missed this story. first off, i must comment on how much i loved the description of the warpth cloud was engulfed in at the begining of the chapter, i thought that relating it to being in the arms of someone you love was the perfict way to get the point across, because everyone will be able to imagine it, no matter how long its been since someone has cared about them. secound, i thought that the confusion that cloud felt was portrayed well in this chapter, you have a very unique way of describing feelings and events, it really helps to make the story and the mood your own. and finaly we come to the end of the chapter. it was so addorable! it made me smile, im so glad that zack was there, i cant imagine how much cloud misses him. i cant wait for your next chapter, i want to know why clouds im pain (apart from the obvious reasons). the only advice i could give is becareful with your grammer, there were a few mistakes, but other then that, fantastic as always.

Sabith

so now cloud is dead, i wonder who is going to find his body? i really cant wait for the next chapter because it promisses to be very entertaining. sorry it took me so long to review. hope you update soon

Sabith

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

this was definatly not a shitty chapter. poor cloud is always so addorable when hes broken and begging. their is nothing cuter then a guy in pain lol. i have never seen you update so fast, i hope your next chapter will be out just as quickly. vincent is awsome and it was totaly fitting that he is the one that saved cloud. once again awsome chapter and i hope you update soon.

Sabith

Whoa. Awesome story you've got here. Damn, I love it.

that was an addorabble chapter. poor cloud, he so alone. their were only one or two grammer mistakes that i noticed. i love this story and hope you have a chance to update soon

Sabith