uh...I think u put the wrong chapter in the wrong story lol. Its okay but u should get it fixed. You put Kingdom Hearts in Pokemon story XD just a pointer :p

Yay! chapter 6! Poor kei, I hope he turns into charmander and burn team rocket's ** with his flamethrower! XD

I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE! IM ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES! OwO

write more write more... pleaase... Aki-chan wants to read more... ^.^

Stop making out with Pichu! XD LOL!

I love you so much because there i another chapter after this to enjoy ^.^

[I meant to give this to you so long ago... laziness is bad]

KYA! HORMONES! RIKU-CHAN! HORMONES! CANDY MOUNTAIN!! CANDY MOUNTAIN!!

Okay, um, sorry about that... but... (cough) That was just awesome... I love Pichu/Hashi's cocky nature. And his hormones XD Please write more, Riku-chan. Make P/H pounce Kei! (glomps Riku-chan with love)

I think the transformation scene needs some work. A little more detail perhaps

You need to describe the transformation. Is it painfull?

Okay start, but are you including Digimon? There is a Pokemon only section in the Game category, if you weren't aware