I followed your previous KoP story, and I must say, you've improved by leaps and bounds, both plot and style. It's pretty scary, actually. XD

As for betaing, I wouldn't mind doing it for you if you still need it :-)

I just love this story!
Please update soon!

I liked it. Hopefully you'll have time to update soon :)

Seems like I better review now, so sorry about the lateness! I wonder how our heroes would fare - and maybe hope the guy with the horse would be an ally!

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Interesting XD the story's back =P again... poor Kouichi, he must really be afraid of using his powers... darkness >.< he's always has had problems with that... anyways XD great chapter =P update as soon as you can =P

O.O establishing dusk's prescence a little early, eh? poor Kouichi and Kouji, for he seems to have suffered greatly at the hands of dusk... for that matter poor Izumi! at least she's not exactly the damsel in distress character anymore, just inexperienced. and i like Mitsu the horse. He's amusing and a good companion to Kouji.

I loved the chapter and that you updated. I was afraid that you had abandoned the story...

Yay 4th chapter! XD
I hope everything will come out okay... I'm also worried too... Nya~!

UPDATE!! XD

update soon
i love this storryy =)

update soon! ilove this story!

I love the part with Hitoru! Glad I came up with it! As well as the teasing between him and Mary was cute. The campfire scene was well written. The Lucreacia thing isn't weak it's legitimate feelings. Well I can identify with them at least. But over all it was an enjoyable chapter

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"It could only be the Solider they had helped all those years ago" Solider? Soldier?

I love the way Kouji and Masaru argue. It's like a good Takuya and Kouji argument, without the Takuya.

"Where my brother is, so will travel that way. Hopefully will either come across more Warriors or he’ll know where to locate some" will? we'll?

Other than that, happy new chapterness!

Ugh, but I know what you mean about it being your baby - I'd really like to do CG some good, but I'm afraid I'll kill it while feeding in new chapters. @__@ (I need to finish my homework and get started on it again).

If Kouji delivered the message and Kouichi never found out, I'd be hitting my head on the desk right now. XD

Nice to see you updated once again! Kouji with awful writing, what a laugh!

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Horray! I'm happy you finally updated! I like the mystique of this story, so I'm not too upset that it takes you FOREVER and a day to update, but you know... Keep up the good work. I like how Kouji has awful handwriting.

YAY! The 3rd chap is really awesome and great! It's getting more and more interesting. I wonder Hitoru really see the future. :3


UPDATE SOON!! XD I WANT TO READ MORE OF THIS!!

=) I love your previous version AND this version! I can't wait to read more!