that was cool, and written in an interesting format. i had a hard time following who was talking, but other than that it was great

Hm, I must admit that this was an intersting piece - I usually don't read much of the poetry on this site, but this poem-ish piece was very engaging.

Actually, I had to put my close-reading hat on, and really pay attention to what was being said - it took some narrowed eyebrows, but in the end I like the two convergent trains of thought.

A well written and well thought-out piece.

QBC

strange yet effective... i like it.

aw.. so.. so.. deep
keep it up!

Really cool! I liked that you used a different style!

wow... that was very deep. good fic! :)

Wow. I really liked this. It was a different style, and it's really cool. Very, very good. It was so simple, and yet so.. abstract.

Hm... The ending was... eh...

Oh, but I like the way you wrote this. It's a unique style that I don't think I've really seen before. The whole idea of the story was also pretty cool/fascinating. It's kind of philosophical. It makes sense, too. (Well, at least, it does to me.) The whole concept of being nonhuman and being human made this story REALLY (sorry, I'm in a kind of "happy" mood right now) interesting. Out of the 5 star rating, I think I'd rate this a 4.9 star. ^_^