You are a very talented author and you really do a good job of storytelling. I just think the chapters were too short. If this was a one-shot, then it should have been done as one page and not have any chapters.

I'd love to see more of this. Good job.

I know this feeling. Half way between this world and the next the one called only Erik waits for me because I am he. Born different, but born for pain. Child of O.G is now my name. Not to be funny but I know this feeling, except it's Erik who reaches for me in the night, whose voice lulls me to speak at night.