 glo316 2007-02-08 . chapter 1i don't think you rushed it at all...i thought it was wonderful, really heartfelt and realistic - oh, and the sarcastic mentioning of alex/alexis was funny...
thanks for putting a smile on my face... |
 TrixieFirecracker 2007-02-05 . chapter 1I loved this. Daniel and Betty seemed spot on. Good job. I hope you post more. |
 monkaholic 2007-02-05 . chapter 1Nice story, very sweet ending. |
 JackSam 2007-02-05 . chapter 1Good fic. Write more soon. |
 didi6 2007-02-05 . chapter 1Great storie, whrite soon! :) |
 P'tfami 2007-02-05 . chapter 1For a pretty bizarre episode, I think you did a good job of summerising Daniel's coping mechanisms. Oe lack of.
The dialogue was snappy and reflected the characters resp. personalities. "Pollyanna lives" :) how droll. |