Um, it was Arya that rejects Eragon, not the other way around...

It's too short. It was the other way around. You need to develop a writing style. You need to give emotion and passion. Read more than one author because you can get ideas and after a while you may pick up something from it. Some people are writers and some learn to be writers. Practice. It will take time.

I thought it stunk!
Arya's the one who rejects Eragon. NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND.
yes I believe that they should get together and stuff, but your peom really sucked.

hmm...this letter seems to be a bit backwards...isn't it ERAGON that loves ARYA and ARYA that rejected him?!? You certainly did use your imagination, though, switching their views of each other like that. Interesting. Ya know, Arya should be rejected by Eragon sometime, maybe in the next book. It's mean how she just crushed Eragon like that. Nice idea, anyway.

YAY! FINALLY someone realises that ayra needs to be rejected once in a while!

wouldnt it have been ez-r 2 make it b that arya was giving the letter 2 eragon...cause shes the 1 bing like WERE NOT MENT 2 B! (i totally think shes having major pms the whole book, lol)

Hey Sarah, This is a short, sharp and shiny story (OH NO! MY OLD TEACHER IS RUBBING OFF ON ME! IM MELTING IM MELTING!)

There is just one thing though... Arya never liked Eragon... didn't she reget him twice or trice or three times or something?

Anyway still love ya
DevilSister

But Arya dosnt like Eragon she rejected him. Twice.