Awwh Cloud is so cute!


And I am a little confused, I thought Cloud had like special powers or something... Aww maybe I was wrong or maybe we just didn't get there yet.

Anyway nice chapter.

so cute wanna read more :)

Good Chapter, love Vincent and his fatherly ways. Even Zack's medling helped out Seph and Cloud.

Thanks for the update and can't wait to read the next chapter.

This is really good! I'm definitely looking forward to more.

You are brilliant! Don't give up!

Yay! Another chapter! And Cloud seems to be coming farther in a possible-relationship-with-Sephy sort of way.

-coos in delight-
Lil Cloudy is having his first crush... well I think it's his first crush anyway ^^;
such a cute chapter... well cute to me atleast, it was kinda warm and fluffy. I bet when Cloud was talking to Vince his face just kept getting reder and reder XD

I alos like the fatherly instincts Vince has for Cloud, nothing like a good death threat to keep people on their toes when courting someone
-does a little twirl-
Once again i say this, thank you for resuming this story, I get ay too many where the author just suddenly up and stops updating their stories and it drives me nuts cause I really wanted to know the what happens next thing.

~Mizu

Er... *faxes you chocolate*

This chapter was really really cute. =3

Lol, that /was/ 'a lot of conversing'! I didn't mind though. Auwah, your Cloud is /so/ freaking adorable~ hah, I love it when he kicks **! FIGHT, CLOUD, FIGHT!! *cheers for him*

Great work, SF! :D

I bet that they were gonna kiss *giggles* but damn Zack for interrupting D: I just love it when Zack says something smart ^^ And Vincent is so cute looking over Cloud *hugs him* How old was Cloud again? I forgot xD Well, will wait for update ^^

Great new chapter! Hope to see more soon.

Please don't let Sephiroth go insane or evil in this fanfic

I'd like to see more!

Woohoo...I'm glad that your gonna continue writting this story:)

Looks like they a gonna be huntin' Hojo's...hehehe

Damn that Zack's always coming in at the wrong momment...lol

Good chapter hon, can't wait to read the next one. Thanks for posting:)

I'm crazy for wanting more of this fic? ...Okay. Then I'm proud to be a crazy person! :O

Yeah, I do think this was better than previous chapters. But it wasn't like the old ones were bad or anything...so.

I'm so glad you decided to continue! And you're very welcome for the encouragement! Any time, any time. :P

Ergh, have a good time in uni. I'm only in my junior year of high school (which started today, blech!) and I think /I'm/ overwhelmed. You've probably got it loads worse than me. D'= poor you. You'll do fine! ;)

(“I must congratulate you, Zack, upon once again disproving the theory that you are simply dumb muscle,” Sephiroth said, scouring the parchment in his hands.

“Everyone forgets,” Zack snickered. “Now, read it out already!”)

Everyone DOES forget. XD I loved that part!

SQUE!
-pounces author with a chibi glomp-
you wrote more!
-lets go and runs around in circles crowing with delight-
I has more knowledge on the story now!

Okay I'll be more normal now ^_^ even though I've knoww I was crazy for over 5 years ^_^

oh and good luck with all your assignments!

~mizu