Wow... That was a rather abrupt end, but I'm glad that Darth Hideous- Sidious is dead.

great chapter

That was awesome! i noticed some spelling mistakes but the storyhline made up for them completely!!

nice story =D
although the ending was a bit too rushed lol

VERY NICE. tHE stupid Palpatine dies!

Good story! I am now going to go check out the sequel I noticed earlier!
~Alien Roxi~

First off sorry about not posting a review after each chapter, but the story was so interesting that I just kept on reading. Now on with the review.
Great story, Owen got what he deserved and I'm glad that Luke was able to be the one to deliver what he deserved. And the fact that Luke would try to curse in Hutt thinking that his father didn't understand was great,only to find out that you can't fool a Sith lord. I wish that Vader would have saved Beru though, after all she was Luke's only light in the dark.In all I have to say BRAVO and KUTOS to you Lady G. GREAT STORY

This was incredible, I loved it! Man, I've never seen Owen be so evil that a Sith lord is nicer in comparison (though it's definitely believable the way you've written it!) Poor little Luke... :( But I loved the ending - I'm looking forward to catching up on the sequel!

Excellent story! You should write a sequel... remember, Lord Vader told Luke that they would go find Obi-Wan... what if Obi-Wan helped Luke and Anakin to return to the light side? If Luke explained how Obi-Wan cared for him that once and always looked after him, Lord Vader would be likely to spare him.

Food for thought. Yes, I don't think that the Lars knew in canon Luke was Vader's son. I wonder how it would have changed their attitude. Definitely not as radically as you described, but you have the artistic license ;)

I believe the feelings Vader has for his son are from the light side, but does it mean that Vader and Luke are dark and light at the same time? Hopefully Luke will not follow the rule of the Sith that apprentice has to slay his master.

this chapter totally tore me up inside. It was so sad. Such a good chapter but so sad. Excellent work.

Nice ending, I always like it when Palps gets it. Keep writing more Luke/Vader, I love it.

i hope not, even though the Palpatine is dead there is still so much for Luke to learn...

Finally I get read the reat of the chapters and leave you a review.Fanfiction has been a pain lately

Part of me is hoping this not the end of a wonderful story but a part of me hopes that maybe you are working another "A"Marie story. I miss her antics terrble.

aw, great story!! i loved all of it!! i liked how in theis chapter, half of it vader was anakin, the toehr half he was vader, showed that there was still a cnoflict in him. and go luke for killing the emperor! i hope you continue with this story, you could go in so many directions with it, i hope you do a sequel (sp?)!1 once again, supreme job! :-)