I think this diserves a sequel, but I think there already is... IDK, I love this story and your other Willy/OC ones!

OMG! You have no idea how much I love this story. It was beautiful!! In fact, it inspired me to go out and buy the movie!! I love the way you made Willy. And Odette was really well written. Good job! ^__^

That was - - - Whoa! Wow! Lots of action jammed in the end. Boy, Willy seems to have a lousy track record with women. Worse than lousy - like really, really rotten, evil women! It's a very good thing that Charlie stepped in and introduced him to Odette.

I want to say that I have truly enjoyed this fic. It was quite wonderful at the start and ended up very exciting. Who knew candy makers and espionage beyond stolen recipes? 8-O

One teeny (hopefully constructive) criticism. You have a tendency to use the same word over and over again in a sentence or paragrap. It would read better if you used other words. Even with that, it is a very good story and Odette has her own voice. (And I don't want her mad at me! She has a mean hook.)

I, for one, would like to place a vote for a sequel. If it's half as exciting, it will be a wild ride!

Thank you for sharing!

again, you rock at this!!

teriffic update. I love the moments 'tween Willy & Odette.

yay!! *throws mardi-gras size party in honor of author*

i love it!!

I hope Odette & Willy r reunited soon.

Keep up the great work.

I love this chapter! I see they're starting to get along with each other.

hehehe. Keep up the great work!

an interesting Willy Wonka story. Its very good though.

BTW, I suggest that u space out the paragraps. They look so clumped 2gether & its hard 2 read.

Anyway, keep up the great work & please update soon.