Very nostalgic and bittersweet. I liked it. Thanks.

wat a beautiful storie...magical...

this is a horribly bittersweet story. I love the sophistication the poem lends to the story, as well as the excellent writing.

well, if he died young, i'm sure he would've gone out with a bang.

brittney

This is definitely the best Holly pairing I have ever read. :D Brilliant, it is :)

oh...oh wow...this...is a marvelous story. And it's your first Fowlfic?...Holy crap. It's truly amazing. I...have no idea what to say. This...this is...whoa. This is truly an amazing story, you have great potential as a writer. It's deep, thoughtful and sad. The desriptions, word choice, and just plain writing is phenomanal. I am amzed. Keep writing, my friend, keep writing.

Very sad, but in a beautiful way. We all need a good bout of being sad every once in a while, and you mad this fic one of the best ones I have ever read. Kudos.

omg...you made me c-c-(hic) cry! write another one please.

OMG'S THAT WAS THE MOST SWEETEST SADDES THING IVE EVER READ

I like this story. Though I'm sad to say that I'm glad that it wasn't longer. Cause if it was...I would have cried with all the well written sadness. My face, eyes, and mouth are all tense and ready to cry. You are a very gout writer. Happy writings!

This was.. strange to comprehend. But it was good, very sad but well written.

- Atra.

Veryvery powerful!

Would you like to have a story put up on another site?

It's and I'd greatly appreciate if you'd allow for this to be posted on the fanfiction archive. It's small, and growing, but we need some quality fics to start it off. Reply if you are interested, I could do most of the work in setting up your account and putting your stories on if you wish. If you don't want to I understand, it's extremely rude for me to randomly ask it :P

Great fic! The plot is so original! Especially the neding, is so...so like Artemis Fowl. I just so full of emotions, I don't know what to say, the fic's haken me up pretty good.

sniff, sniff...

This was too sad... I wouldn't want Arty to end up like this...

Anyway, good work. A few grammar or spelling mistakes, I think, but not too distracting. It was a good story!

-mxnhpfreak

PS. This is my first review in the AF fandom (I think).

Good story, but it's really sad!