Well I do understand where Shiine is coming form. And why people would force him. I mean, they should also expect it, and stop telling him how selfish about it. Some people takes years to mend a broken heart, but for them to just believe that Shinne could just do that within an hour or so is stupid. I guess, people here are the one who don't understand Shiine. And Riya and Chacha should've expected it, they should have known his reaction and should not force him into doing something he hated just because they're his friend.

Chacha should've known better. She might've been hurt, but she should've wonder how more Shiine felt with it. So people in the palace should stop feeling sorry for her, and they should let Shiine grieve his broken heart for a while.

What's with Dorothy as well. She should be the first one to understand Shiine, and whatever maybe she should take his side. Not that I'm saying that she should hate the other two, but she should be atleast Shiine's first line of defense against people who think Shiine is being selfish.

Anyway, that's it.

I suppose this would never get updated again, but I'm still hoping against hope that it would - there are, after all, only a few Akazukin ChaCha fics, even fewer gems out of the fics. And this is one of the few. :)

The characters are so IC and, being a Shiine fan, I sincerely hope he gets the girl. Yeah. D Because, srsly, dude, ChaCha and Riya are cute, but I don't see them actually getting to a point where they would understand each other once they grow older.

So pretty please with a cherry on top if you're still here on , would you please update? :) :) :)

I know it's very likely that this story won't be finished, but you did a great job with this. I'm a Chacha/ Riiya fan,but you made it so that you can't help but feel sorry for Shiine. Nice job

AAH!WHY DOES SHIINE ALWAYS HAVE TO SUFFER! I HOPE IT IS CHA-CHA AND SHIINE! PLEASE!

ZOMG!

i loved it.

Drama, love, and a midevil feel to it.

I wish that she could split in two so she could have both, but alas, she cant.

Keep up the fantastic work. I enjoy your story a lot.

Going on to chappie 2!

Keara

why dont you finish this ...please!

its so beautiful and your characters aren't ooc...it fits into the story like its really meant to end this way

please! the series never really had closure, it drove me nuts. you have to finish this! please

That was very well written. o.o

Full of emotion, wow.

So...no more?3 coming 4 years and well,no more?

Its quite a good piece,very good plot.Written well.Thumbs up.)

two thumbs up! This fic is really well written. :) you must be really experienced in writing fics, right? :)

please continue its really great! :)

Whoa! Very dark for an Akazukin Chacha fic...but then again, it's my first time reading one! You've made it a fic that I would add to my favorites list! Keep up the good work!

Update SwordSkill, update! Do you how much I love this fic? Update! Now!

Cool

hey there! the story is really kawai

hope you update soon

And I could only hope too! HOPE THAT YOU'LL UPDATE THIS FIC SOON!