Ha ha! _ I loved the story AND the pic!

This was a very good setup. I think you could have done more with the sex scene, though. You said it was an attempt at PWP, but how can it be porn if there's no sex? Just thought I'd let you know.

lol, excellent! So that's what he was looking for, haha! :)

Thought I'd get around to reviewing XD

I have this open as I'm starting the doujinshi version now... (it'll take me a while methinks) I want it to be as good as possible... which may mean redrawing etc... but I have to do it!

You're so awesome for writing this... I just don't have the imagination (though I still wanna know what Ed was looking for...)

*Must practice drawing automail*

AHH MY EYES ARE BLEEDING WITH YAOI GOODNESS XD great story!

so what was ed looking for?

loved the fic! smexy!

i love the ending! very nice. )

“What am I to you, Roy?”

“Mine”

Awesome answer.

hmm, i wanted to know what he was looking for, lol! nice story! :)