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Raablyn
2005-02-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is funny, and interesting. GOing to read the rest now . . . and isn't it Lolth? If so, you have a typo, though I'm probably risking my neck in telling you so. Good, very good chapter. I like the characters. Going to read the rest now (for real)
Lisa
2005-01-12
ch 23, anon.
abuseHi,

Just finished "Drows' Tale" and have to say it's the best damn story on this section!

Any more updates on the way?
Sword and Magic
2004-09-28
ch 13,
abuseHi there. This is a really nice and funny story. I've just discovered it and I can't read the rest of it right now, but I will when I have more time. :)
Neko
2004-08-03
ch 23, anon.
abuseThis chapter was definitly worth the wait ^_^ Though, now that the battle's over I can't help but wonder how the rest of the company is going to respond to Dil becoming a drider.

I loved the re-write of chapter 1 too, so much twisted humor heh heh.
brandon
2004-08-02
ch 23, anon.
abusewonderful story, i love your sense of humor, i really look forward to seeing what will happen next, thank you very much for writing this story for us all to enjoy.
Evergladelord
2004-07-27
ch 23,
abuseUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Griz'
2004-04-10
ch 23, anon.
abuseYou got me hooked. I found myself reading your story at work also. This is one of my favorite fanfics. I was laughing so much. I hope you update soon. You left us a nice clifhanger. I have to say that I fear for the our heroes with Dil' as a drider. I just love Rain's comments.
Markus Hanaoka
2004-02-16
ch 1,
abuseupdate soon!! this is an order from readers!
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
Evergladelord
2004-01-31
ch 23,
abuseDilandau a Drider? Ladies and Gentleman, we have problem!
Evergladelord
2003-11-28
ch 22,
abuseAbout time you damn updated...
Neko
2003-11-23
ch 22, anon.
abuse*wipes tears from eyes* This story just gets better and better! I almost choked laughing at all the botchs that occured in the plan.

I can't help but feel a little sorry for Rose though. But, the sacrifice of Mezzen seemed a very LLoth-ish thing to do. I'm just glad she didn't agree to it, Mezzen's questions are rich.

*snickers* Illithids giving 'the talk', too funny *busts appendix laughing*
ChichiX
2003-10-15
ch 1, anon.
abuse*grin* There were several lines I liked. I do appreciate the humor at the Drow's expense and the parody of their culture. Such lines as 'Female! Female!' and 'This is my care face' are my favorites. So far this sounds like a light, fair quality source of entertainment. I like the character interaction, and I hope you will continue to develop them so that they are not one dimensional and don't get stuck in a rut of dull recycled humor.
Dark elf
2003-09-15
ch 21, anon.
abusethis is by far the best forgotten realms fanfic i hav ever read! sure at times it is strange/stuiped or makes little sense! but hey it's funny! please keep it up annd please don't stop till ur done!
hmmz
2003-07-29
ch 21, anon.
abusewell that was interesting to say the least
for the first 4 chapters i was about to stop reading and move to another story because of the childishness of the characters and the childish writing style, but then i began to think this is supposed to be funny and drow are childish in their plotting and planning, so what if its intentional? then i decide hey ill keep reading and i was suprised at how absolutely hilarious this was. other than a multitude of spelling errors the writing style, while not something i often see, flowed perfectly with the storyline and i was quite impressed i give this 4/5 stars
Kharma Lotus
2003-07-24
ch 21,
abuseI think you have a lot of potential as a writer. You were able to captivate me as a reader. I like the depth you give to your characters. They seem to possess their own distinct personality.
However, I feel they do not capture the true nature of the drow people. They are to jovial, and caring. No female would brook such disrespect from a male. I do not mean to lecture, but they would almost be mistaken for surface elves.
With the rare occurence of typo's aside, your writing is fluid and consistent. I laud you to continue your dedication to writing. I love your story. This said, know that I am very picky about what I read. I have read all of your entries. With some minor adjustments, this was overall a 4 on a scale of 0-5. Good Job!!
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