Really sweet ending. Especially with the Angel Wings. Guess Rinoa got the hang of sorceress powers!

I like how Rinoa went to hug Squall cause it just seems so much more believable. Nice work

Cheers

Keep Writing

I really like your style and the description of the characters is very precise and true to the game. It's well-balanced, sweet without being fluffy or overdone.

wow, simply amazing! It wasnt too fluffy either, excellent! Faves definately. You pinpointed squalls character exactly!

Dead Pollen

Beautiful writing. Your descriptions are perfect for the atmosphere, vivid but not overdone. The characterization is great, and the dialogue has a nice natural flow. The ending image was particularly lovely.