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*screams*
YOU WROTE AN EPILOGUE! YAY!

Interesting chapter. Loved the last bit. It's similar enough to the original, but still wove Dalamar in nicely.

Lol, yeah, Dalamar's hot, one of the hottest characters I ever knew, but Raistlin? Not so sure about that one. The way he stares at me, brr!

Thanks for reminding me that Nuitari (that's who you were referring to, yes?) is Paladine's nephew! I always forget!

is it really true? caramon is finally using his single brain cell to realize that something is wrong? i never thought that was possible... it'd be a bit strange if he kept that one brain cell working for more than two minutes though, so he shoulnd't be too much trouble. not much help to everyone else though

All I can say is that this is a very awsome epilogue.

Ah! I've been waiting for this fanfic to update for what has felt like forever! I really enjoyed this fanfic and I love all of your other ones. I was hoping for a better... hm... slightly more happier ending, but I guess happy endings don't really exist for heroes. I can't wait until the sequel.

Aww...Can't wait for the sequel! Raistlin and Dalamar are certainly not a 'sunshine and roses' couple, like someone said before, I believe.
I'm sure Raistlin'll win against Fistandantilus. Or am I just being a Raistlin fangirl...?
Caramon loves his brother too much. Perhaps Paladine is wrong. His love truly blinds him...
Fistandantilus is freakin' hard to type. I'm starting to understand the work involved with this story, lol.
Update SOON, or by Gilean's book, I shall send penguins after you.
By the way, I'm not such of a Raist/Dal fan, but this series was still one of the best I've read.
*waits for flames*
=.='

Interesting twist, it opens up a lot of possibilities. If it were me writing this, I'd have to try SO hard to get their reactions right instead of letting the fangirl side of me take over, hehe.
Can't help but wonder what Raistlin is going to do now that he knows Dalamar's alive. He's not in the easiest position in the world, I wonder how he'll hande it...?

So anticlimactic the end...
But you know? It makes me want to read more about this two... I can't wait to see what comes up in the sequel, and though it's a bit angsty and dark, I can only hope it gets better towards the end :)

Lovely, at least Raistlin knows he is not alone, and will do almost anything to get his control back. He is strong, I have no doubt who will win :D

Oh my, that was a very exciting chapter...poor Dalamar and Raistlin...(gives them both a hug). I shall eagerly be awaiting the sequal and all the excitment and suspense that comes with it. Keep up the excellant work!^_^

First off, I have to say that I am greatly impressed by how you wove Dalamar into the this whole series, with close to no changes to the original plot, even though most of Alvorecer it seems, contains little of the other characters.

Back to the story now... It's nice to see a chapter that has Raistlin as the main character. I've always thought of that scene with Raistlin and Caramon as one of the most important parts of the book, and it's nice to see this interpretation of it.

Evil cliffhanger :(

I'm glad to hear that this chapter flowed more easily. It certainly shows. I love the interaction between Raist and Fist. It's quite entertaining and portrays the perfect sense of being possessed. This chapter was intense. I kept leaning forward, wanting more and more.
That cliff hanger at the end was a wonderful touch. I can't wait to see what happens next. Looking for you next update...

ahh, damn that cliffhanger! i really cant wait to see what happens after this. i can barely remember what happened in the book, but i have a feeling the next chapter of this will be more interesting. I'm not very good at reveiws, and theres no way i could have reveiwed everything in this series, but the one thing that really stood out to me is that your writing style is really good. it reminded me of how things were written in the books. theres not a lot of writers who could stick with something like this and keep up a good writing style. you got all the emotion right, and the fight scenes were actually worth reading!
anyway, i love this series, theres not enough raistlin/dalamar stuff on here. i hope you didnt think that reveiw was totaly pointless, like i said, im not very good at em. keep writing, i cant wait to read the next chapter, byes x

You are most evil to leave us here! Yes, you are!!
I can't believe it's finally time to confront Raistlin, Dalamar and Fistandantilus... and I want to read the next chapter as soon as possible... T_T

Gods... I loved this chapter! I love the way you portray the characters, so weak but so powerful. And Caramon's attitude, I believe it suits him. Even though he is having doubts about "Raistlin's" behavior, he wants so much to believe he has really changed his heart, that Fistandantilus could say anything at all, and he would accept it.

Please, don't leave us suffering for a long time. Your story is great, as always, and it has a way to capture your attention that you want to keep reading...

Argh! No! The suspense is murder!
Poor Raistlin. Once again your writing talent amazes me. Keep up the great work and Please update again soon.

oh thank the gods, he finally found poor Raistlin! hopefully Dalamar will get that it's not him...since of course Caramon wasn't bright enough to do so. i'm so glad they're finally going to be together again and Raistlin won't have to go on thinking that Dalamar is dead. absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!