what is this about?

this is a lot more like the books than the book based fanfics
interesting

0.o Wow... You're an amazing author!

Thank you so much for updating, this story is amazing!

I've reread the chapter twice now to try and think of the proper words to say to you, but words escape me. This chapter is absolutely wonderful and please, please update soon.

This was a story well written in the true 'Oz' spirit..plenty of fantasy, yet enough 'down to 'Oz' to make it seem believable. Such deep insights...especially at the end. As a sentimental creature, the Tin Man would be the one most troubled by what Dorothy's mortality would mean.

Once again, bravo to you! This chapter does indeed deal with a difficult truth, but the fact is that it is a truth and an inevitable one that very few people wish to write about, and I commend you for delving into this topic which so many people simply ignore, and doing so with such grace. Perhaps some advice that the great Wizard himself should have given to Tin Man is that a heart is not judged by its ability to hold on, but by its ability to let go.

Once again and a thousand times hence, bravo and keep up the wonderful work.

I've written difficult chapters myself before, and it is best to just go right through with them. I sometimes feel like Dorothy does in here.

As usual, I'm loving this - though I'll admit the last line of this chapter made me feel a bit uneasy. Write on, please.

Well, apology accepted as the wait was worth it. I hope the next update will be soon as it's off to a good start and I hope we see more development in Dorothy and Tin Man's relationship.

(by the way, I see you've read the books now and so whatever you do, please don't include the story of the original Tin Man's origins as I detest it wholesomely!)

great so far update soon

How could I have forgotten to review the very first chapter? This story is very much inspired, and I cannot wait to see what the fourth chapter holds for Dorothy and Tin Man.

I would also like to mention that my favorite part so far (which I believe I left out of my review for chapter two-I must have been unwell at the time to forget!) is when Tin Man is watching the sun set. This part was so well-writen and so full of insights into the inner workings of his heart. I always felt that Tin Man's part in the movie was woefully small and this story gives him the justice he deserves.

Thank you for your kindly message as well-I should be the one thanking you for your kindness in replying! Every word of encouragement and praise I wrote you have earned tenfold and then some. You have magnificent writing skills and as long as you are willing to write and post, I will be willing to read.

P.S. I really am not evil, as my profile would suggest. I only put that there to keep the Winged Monkeys at bay. :)

I was anticipating this chapter, and let me tell you, you do not disappoint! This is wonderful writing, especially considering the long time away from it. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the wonderful work!

This story is absolutely beautiful, I hope you continue it. It is easily just as well-written as In Trouble or in Pain (which I also loved.) Keep up the wonderful work...and I hope you update soon!

Hurrah, a sequel! I'm enjoying it very much already. It's a little strange to see Dorothy being constantly refered to as a "witch," but I'm sure I'll get used to it in time. Keep going - I can't wait to see more!