 Minstrel of Fire 2008-12-20 . chapter 1I like this concept, and i haven't encountered it before (i think). I thought by having Zuko be afraid as he looked at the statue and remembered his father, you made him human. They were pretty much in character...I liked the end, how Zuko decided to tell Katara, and also his reaction to almost burning her (directly after thinking about the agni kai). |
 maikofan13 2008-07-05 . chapter 1 Wauw.
I'm just speechless |
 Inazuma Akai 2008-05-20 . chapter 1A bit angsty for me but it suits Zuko's character. And there were a few grammatical errors.
In the story Zuko says that he knows that Ozai hates him, but in the canon it seems that Zuko's more in denial than anything else. I think it could have been a bit longer but I think it was very insightful as far as Zuko's inner turmoil and the group's reaction to it. Hope you write more! |
 Tessa Marlene 2008-02-17 . chapter 1Loved it, very nice descripion of Zuko's inner suffering, he's very in character here. Good job. |
 FireChildSlytherin5 2007-11-17 . chapter 1nice. :) |
 HaloFin17 2007-11-14 . chapter 1I liked this one, too. I'm sure there are all kinds of emotional repercussions after the agni kai that Zuko just keeps hidden away, and it would take something like that to bring them out again. Sweet ending too, btw :)
Halo |
 master of toast 2007-10-11 . chapter 1*speachles in wonder* amazing |
 Dani 2007-03-22 . chapter 1 This thing is Awesome! |
 Lady Charity 2007-03-03 . chapter 1aw, this is sweet! i like it. poor poor Zuko |
 OveractiveImagination39 2007-02-24 . chapter 1That was good. Nice oneshot - sounds like there could be more?
Look forward to reading more from you. |
 smartcheer917 2007-02-09 . chapter 1that was really good
please tell me theres more. |
 merchantfan 2007-02-09 . chapter 1Hey! Nice story. Very emo. |
 Dragon Jadefire 2007-02-06 . chapter 1Good for Zuko! I like this! Its going into my C2! |