FC! Awesome job! Depressing as get out, but awesome, and I never would have seen the end coming! Is this all or will there be more? I'm anxious for your next fic!
MissDoc 7/2/01 . chapter 2
Really interesting. Dave, uh? Looking forward for next part. Some little spelling mistakes (I counted Croatians more than three times), but powerful story. Im not sure if I buy the "nice" way Elizabeth treated Dave, but I liked it.