Two words: Poor Mousse! He's my favorite character, and Shampoo is such a b!+(# to him. (You can read the "code" I used to write the wor, right?)
But it is funny.

lol, very funny and cute! I loved it!

O.O Holy crap... I wrote a story like this once...! but that was years ago... so whatever. BUT this is cute, very cute... very cute... gods too bad no matter HOW hard I try, I CANNOT stand normal het-couples anymore.

CUTE though... not really funny. You shoulda put some Yaoi... and Yuri in there. *pouts*

Absolutely wonderful :) The humor is consistant with that of the manga, I love the part where the fortune teller replies, "No, you blind idiot." and the descriptions are excellent as well; eyes, etc. reallys gives a clear picture for readers. AWESOME!

Not what I had in mind but not bad

Poor, dear sweet Mousse. Although, I'm glad Shampoo doesn't want him; they don't make a good coule. She'd kill him. No women in his future, huh? What am I, chopped liver? Just wait till I get around to posting MY fanfic. Hee, hee, hee...
The writing was good though!

Poor Mousse! It would have been better to have all the women after him- maybe he would have found another!

Hehe...knew a love potion would just make things worse not better. Poor Mousse, he deserves some happiness in his life.

GAAAAACK! POOR MUU-TSU!!!!!!!!!